Before I start, lets clear some things up.
~Dawn is © to Fierystar. She is not mine.
~All magical creatures (except Gradons) are © to Fierystar.
~The name 'Wikes' is © to me.
~Gradons are © to me.
~Midnight, Storm, Hillary-May and Armando are © to me.
~The idea for the RP me anf Fiery do is © to Fiery.
All characters which aren't mine are used with permission.
Ok, lets start!
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Early morning dew glistened on the wet, long grass of the fields. It was bright, the sun half way through rising, the sky a mix of red, orange and yellow. Midnight padded over the fields, awaiting Dawn, his beautiful espeon mate. She was going to meet him there, in the feild, were he would ask to marry her. He carried a ring in a pouch, which was hanging around his neck. He felt lucky, and he was certain she would say the words he wanted to here... They were meant for eachother... He could just tell everything would be alright. He was far from right.
Dawn darted through the forest. I'm really late... Oh, I hope he isn't angry! I wonder what he wants anyway... She thought. She didn't focus on where she was going, trying to figure out what Midnight wanted, and crashed with a loud thud into a tree. 'OUCH!!! STUPID TREE!!!' She yelled in anger. She scratched the tree with her claws, leaving 3 long slashes. She stared at them, satisfied, and raced off.
As she neared the feilds, however, a black, unnatural cloud blew over head, turning the sky black. Midnight did a square halt, staring at the sky. He looked magnificent, like a stag watching over his herd. Suddenly both of them heard a voice inside their head run, run fast, run far, run run run, run fast, run far, run run run... The voice did not stop, refused to stop, and continued repeating itself.
Dawn bolted, as fast as she could towards Midnight. He turned around and spotted the light blue espeon and ran towards her. Before they reached eachother though, a vortex formed in the sky, sucking them in. Both grabbed the ground in their efforts to stay on Earth, but the ground they held gave way and both of the lovers were sucked into the mass of swirling darkness. The pouch flew from Midnight's neck and laided on the ground as the vortex closed, the ring falling out onto the ground were it lay still and silent.
Sticky sap seeped from the scratches in the tree.
The start is good. =) Can't wait to see how the rest of it goes, in the story version insstead of in our rp version! XD
Ooo...That's good. *nod nod*
Thanks. The extra added detail about the tree is very random... ^^; I'll have the next one up soon!
I like it, it's very good! ^-^ Can't wait for the next!
Oh...I thought that the tree sap meant somthing...Hmmm....
Well it means nothing, I just thought it was a good way to end the first part! XD