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Title: Is it good, or no?
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Miccy - March 18, 2006 05:16 AM (GMT)
I'm not that good at inking yet, but my pencil kinda was being stuborn, and wouldn't erase very well...
Anyway, this is what the picture is:
Drawn with pencil, then inked with pen.
I'm the pirate, on the left.
Niki is the ninja on the right.

THE PICTURE IS HERE

QUOTE (My Thoughts On The Picture)
What I Like About The Picture:
My pirate outfit
The way the pirate(me) is standing
Both shoes.
My weird shading technique.

What I Think My Flaws In This Picture Are:
The pencil lines that are showing though.
How even though I tried not to the Niki still looks kinda Naruto-ish.
I messed up on Niki's right arm,  & the bottom of the left boot.
Niki's shorts look weird.


I'm pretty open to whatever you guys have to throw at me about it, don't like it, like it, whichever.

I wanna know your opinions. :)



Mishikotoko - March 18, 2006 12:32 PM (GMT)
since I can't work with ink and a quil, I find it just fine. ^_^

Kaisermikeb - March 18, 2006 06:27 PM (GMT)
I actually really like the style! Aside from that one girl who does the mascots really well, this might be my favorite posted art thus far! Them being original characters is a plus as well.

Miccy - March 20, 2006 08:01 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Mishikotoko @ Mar 18 2006, 12:32 PM)
since I can't work with ink and a quil, I find it just fine. ^_^

lol, thanks Mishi! ^^ <3

Miccy - March 20, 2006 08:03 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Kaisermikeb @ Mar 18 2006, 06:27 PM)
I actually really like the style! Aside from that one girl who does the mascots really well, this might be my favorite posted art thus far! Them being original characters is a plus as well.

xD Aww, thank you!

^^ I could have swore I could have gotten at least a big of critism.
Then again, I've only seen two people's views. :o

Wyatt - March 21, 2006 04:57 PM (GMT)
Needs more hi-res scan. I rather like it.

Kotoko - March 21, 2006 05:09 PM (GMT)
I like it, but it does seem a little naruto-ish.

edit: But I am a naruto fan so I kinda like the naruto-ish style.

Kaisermikeb - March 21, 2006 08:45 PM (GMT)
I disagree. The girls may be ninjas, but they don't look like the naruto kind, and also they are in a completely different style. Naruto uses a very shonen asthetic, where as these are more in a shojo-manga one that rarely even makes it into anime (only in things like super-gals).

It's very cool and a lot more pretty than anything in Naruto.

Miccy - March 21, 2006 10:31 PM (GMT)
One of thems a Ninja, and ones a Pirate if you guy's didn't think of that. o.x;

Hi-res scan?
Confused... >.>

They are a different style, I agree, but its more of the headband.
Now of days its kind of hard for me to invision a ninja without thinking Naruto, but ninja's do have the thingy over their faces.

I was going to put her in all black, w/o the clothesness, but like, it wouldn't have been so sexy. x3; lol




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