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Title: help with a title?
Description: my biggest short coming.


yuesokka - April 9, 2007 05:25 PM (GMT)
ok for my science class we had to write a childrens book on the water cycle and illistarte it.

and well i've come to my finish and i still have no clue for a title. it's the hardest part for me when it comes to writing. so if anyone has any (serious)ideas please help.

the story is written for pre-school and kindergarden ages.
the whole story is about the water cycle.
all the characters' names are actually names from other langauges/countries that mean different things that have to do with water or what ever they are.

i'll post the actuall text once i have it typed up so i can spell check it before i start writting on my drawings or decided to cut and past the text to the pictures.

please and thank yous for any assisants. this is just the hardest thing in the world to me when it comes to this kind of stuff.

Kaisermikeb - April 9, 2007 08:13 PM (GMT)
"HOW GOD CRIES AND WHY IT'S YOUR FAULT!"

"Neptune is pissed!"

"Everybody poops (in the rain)"

"Why does it have to rain?"


btw, didn't you say you weren't going to come back to this convention on the cosplay.com forums?

yuesokka - April 9, 2007 08:46 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Kaisermikeb @ Apr 9 2007, 08:13 PM)
"HOW GOD CRIES AND WHY IT'S YOUR FAULT!"

"Neptune is pissed!"

"Everybody poops (in the rain)"

"Why does it have to rain?"


btw, didn't you say you weren't going to come back to this convention on the cosplay.com forums?

i did say that i wouldn't be coming back unless i had a swimsuit cosplay. since mine didn't get done cause i couldn't find orange lycra till like the week before, but i still find some people on this board very helpful, and i'm still kinda slinking around waiting for more links to pics being posted from con. :P. so i thought i'd post this since i'm checking back still looking for pics.

though i did enjoy talking to everyone at your con who had great distaste for you including memembers of your staff. :P so i might go back for a day just to see if that number has grown.

Yuffie - April 9, 2007 09:00 PM (GMT)
...somehow I find it sad that you walked around talking about your dislike for Mike.

Very sad.

Tsugaru - April 9, 2007 09:04 PM (GMT)
All I can think of is a simple word that is quite catchy.

"Mizu" <_<

Or, you could go with "Namida".

rpb3000 - April 9, 2007 09:05 PM (GMT)
Wow! Even the people who hate us come to our con!

yuesokka - April 9, 2007 09:09 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Yuffie @ Apr 9 2007, 09:00 PM)
...somehow I find it sad that you walked around talking about your dislike for Mike.

Very sad.

i didn't i spent most of my time with my freinds discussing what were gonna do for the rest of the year and just hanging out with them in general. except friday i spent that whole day sleeping.

but i sure the hell wasn't gonna walk away when mike was brought up in a negative manner. it was to much fun. though i do believe i brought up mike atleast once that i recall in the con suite. when someone said something about a con chair and the little kitty boy who was hanging out with me and a freind said oh man that must make them awesome or super cool or something like that. and i said, i guess you haven't met mike have you? and then that got a few poeple stating their feelings about him. other than that i don't recal bringing it up.

but agian i didn't have to since it seemed to be a hot subject for many people.

yuesokka - April 9, 2007 09:10 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (rpb3000 @ Apr 9 2007, 09:05 PM)
Wow! Even the people who hate us come to our con!

only cause freind had bought plane tickets already, so we didn't have much a choice since they couldn't refund the plane tickets and one once she has her mind set on wearing a costume she's gonna wear the costume.

Yuffie - April 9, 2007 09:11 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (yuesokka @ Apr 9 2007, 09:09 PM)
QUOTE (Yuffie @ Apr 9 2007, 09:00 PM)
...somehow I find it sad that you walked around talking about your dislike for Mike.

Very sad.

i didn't i spent most of my time with my freinds discussing what were gonna do for the rest of the year and just hanging out with them in general. except friday i spent that whole day sleeping.

but i sure the hell wasn't gonna walk away when mike was brought up in a negative manner. it was to much fun. though i do believe i brought up mike atleast once that i recall in the con suite. when someone said something about a con chair and the little kitty boy who was hanging out with me and a freind said oh man that must make them awesome or super cool or something like that. and i said, i guess you haven't met mike have you? and then that got a few poeple stating their feelings about him. other than that i don't recal bringing it up.

but agian i didn't have to since it seemed to be a hot subject for many people.

You are so lame.

yuesokka - April 9, 2007 09:20 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Yuffie @ Apr 9 2007, 09:11 PM)
QUOTE (yuesokka @ Apr 9 2007, 09:09 PM)
QUOTE (Yuffie @ Apr 9 2007, 09:00 PM)
...somehow I find it sad that you walked around talking about your dislike for Mike.

Very sad.

i didn't i spent most of my time with my freinds discussing what were gonna do for the rest of the year and just hanging out with them in general. except friday i spent that whole day sleeping.

but i sure the hell wasn't gonna walk away when mike was brought up in a negative manner. it was to much fun. though i do believe i brought up mike atleast once that i recall in the con suite. when someone said something about a con chair and the little kitty boy who was hanging out with me and a freind said oh man that must make them awesome or super cool or something like that. and i said, i guess you haven't met mike have you? and then that got a few poeple stating their feelings about him. other than that i don't recal bringing it up.

but agian i didn't have to since it seemed to be a hot subject for many people.

You are so lame.

no more than you

Yuffie - April 9, 2007 09:30 PM (GMT)
Heh, don't you wish.

Kaisermikeb - April 9, 2007 09:37 PM (GMT)
Yuffie, don't sink to her level.

Yuesokka, I seriously don't know what the fuck your problem is. You've had a chip on your shoulder ever since you came here. We haven't treated you any differently than anyone else who comes of these forums, so why do you have to spread shit about the convention, and about me personally? If you don't like the con, don't come back, it's as simple as that. As for me, I don't really care what you think about me, but I would seriously appreciate it if you didn't bad talk me at my own convention to my members. You've never met me, you have no idea who I am, what the fuck gives you the right? I sacrifice EVERYTHING to put this convention on, and I don't see an ounce of respect for it, and that's fine, but you could at least not blatantly disrespect me or turn people against me.

That's all I have to say on the matter.

Bunny Girl CeeCee - April 9, 2007 10:47 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (rpb3000 @ Apr 9 2007, 09:05 PM)
Wow!  Even the people who hate us come to our con!

That is totally skill!!!
They come because you guys are awsome and they cant stop coming even if they hate you

Kamiokande - April 10, 2007 01:09 AM (GMT)
Troposphere

Where Most Greenhouse Gases Come From

When Staffers Called Mike an Asshole or a Pedophile or Something, They Meant It in a Good Way. It Was Raining at the Time, and Here's Why

smokie - April 10, 2007 02:04 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Kamiokande @ Apr 10 2007, 01:09 AM)
When Staffers Called Mike an Asshole or a Pedophile or Something, They Meant It in a Good Way. It Was Raining at the Time, and Here's Why

There is a God. Otherwise nothing so funny would have ever been able to be typed.

Tsugaru - April 10, 2007 02:13 AM (GMT)
You, my good man, have just won the internets thanks to your signature.

[/offtopic]

smokie - April 10, 2007 03:00 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Tsugaru @ Apr 10 2007, 02:13 AM)
You, my good man, have just won the internets thanks to your signature.

[/offtopic]

Who me?

yuesokka - April 10, 2007 05:55 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Kamiokande @ Apr 10 2007, 01:09 AM)
Troposphere

Where Most Greenhouse Gases Come From

It Was Raining at the Time, and Here's Why

thanks for those suggestion. the last one was pretty good if i can find a way to make it a little shorter, or re word it slightly, thank you.

Metal McFire - April 10, 2007 08:18 PM (GMT)
If anything, you should make it longer. The longer a title is, the more epic it sounds. Just look at the full title for Borat...

Borat: Cultural Learnings of America for Make Benefit Glorious Nation of Kazakhstan.

Or the Aqua Teen movie

Aqua Teen Hunger Force Colon Movie Film For Theaters

:domo:

Kaisermikeb - April 10, 2007 08:46 PM (GMT)
"Butterflies die in the rain"

yuesokka - April 11, 2007 02:36 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Metal McFire @ Apr 10 2007, 08:18 PM)
If anything, you should make it longer. The longer a title is, the more epic it sounds. Just look at the full title for Borat...

Borat: Cultural Learnings of America for Make Benefit Glorious Nation of Kazakhstan.

Or the Aqua Teen movie

Aqua Teen Hunger Force Colon Movie Film For Theaters

:domo:

well for small children it just need to be short and sweet. something a kid can get out that's young.

Metal McFire - April 11, 2007 03:58 PM (GMT)
you could still make it long if you put in words that kids like. Such as:

Water: candy ballons bouncy ball jump rope water ballons

maybe that doesn't make much sense though... :domo:




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