I've been creating a song with my guitar recently, I just recorded what I've got so far, and I want to know what people think. I can hear some things that I want to change, and I'm still going to add more, maybe a solo or something.
Tell me what you think, here it is.

I also have no idea what I want to do in the way of lyrics, so if you have any suggestions, please let me know.

I like it, I'm a sucker for guitar music though. Parts of it sound so much like the music from one of he Everday Shooter levels. I like it a lot. Some bits feel like they have unnatural changes but that could be my lack of understand of music.

much better than me, lol. though i suck at guitar. anyway, keep up the good work.

Thanks. :)
Yeah, I need to work on the transitions. Any lyric suggestions?

ha, i haven't written a song since i was your age and they were parodies then... haha, your age. i make it sound like i'm old. :P

I started figuring out drums for that, but they'd drown out much of the guitar... Maybe a rhythm-track composed of pops, clicks and hisses with a lot of echo (think about a ping-pong match)
As there's a lot happening on the guitar the vocal parts should be sort of minimalistic, too. Plenty of long vocals. Well, I don't know what else you hear in your head when you play that... my suggestions might be way off your original intentions.