Title: My writing
Description: Lots of writing and stuff
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - April 16, 2007 05:43 PM (GMT)
Hi. I did some stuff for school, and i wanted to share it with you.
Mr. Frosty
Mr. frosty bulgy, round,
Watching snowflakes fall to the ground.
"What shall you wear? A quilt? A kilt?
I'm not so sure you would wear stilts."
"Carrot? Coal? A skirt of grass?"
"I'm not so sure I think I'll pass."
"Then what, pray tell, shall you wear?"
"I think I'll need a little hair."
Given some hair, a coat, a hat,
It looked as it he'd gotten fat.
When spring came, temperatures got higher,
The boy then put his clothes in the dryer.
what do you guys think? (I have more, and I'll post it later.)
IttyBittyKitty - April 17, 2007 04:45 PM (GMT)
Oh how dandy that way :applause Feels like im reading a lil book. Nice rhyming.
Queen of the Cosmos - April 17, 2007 08:06 PM (GMT)
That's a real good reading, what type of writing of poetry did you use?
I like Alexandrin XD
Well, do you think you might add to it later?
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - April 17, 2007 10:11 PM (GMT)
I don't know, here's another one:
My Deathday
Tho' my life's been filled with fear,
I know my Deathday's almost here.
All the times my wife's been mean,
I'll get back at her, it seems.
All my debts are left with her,
my sons will leave complete massacure.
And at my funeral she will cry,
Boy, I'll like it when I die.
That one's a little weird. :poke
Queen of the Cosmos - April 17, 2007 10:48 PM (GMT)
Ok, are you feeling alright? :S
It really is creepy.
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - April 18, 2007 12:35 AM (GMT)
don't worry, :lol I'm fine. :heh
Queen of the Cosmos - April 18, 2007 01:18 AM (GMT)
It's because of the Virginia shooting that I was worried.
His written words made him commit some stuff XD
So I wanted to make sure you were fine.
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - April 18, 2007 02:18 PM (GMT)
Oh, yeah. :( Don't worry. :D
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - April 18, 2007 02:26 PM (GMT)
This one's a haiku:
My Special Freind
When I put you to
My lips inflamed with sweetness
Cocoa is the best!
I like that one. :heh
Queen of the Cosmos - April 18, 2007 02:57 PM (GMT)
It's far more positive then the last one.
Good job on it :D
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - April 18, 2007 10:38 PM (GMT)
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - June 8, 2007 01:00 AM (GMT)
I forgot to post on this for awhile. :smirk
See The World Through A Different Eye
See the world through a different eye,
where reality and dreams collide.
The sky is red instead of blue,
what you see is not the truth.
The sun is dark instead of light,
the trees grow to enormous height.
And life is not the way it seems,
when you're living in a dream.
Like it? :)
waxc3 - June 8, 2007 11:07 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 @ Jun 7 2007, 08:00 PM) |
I forgot to post on this for awhile. :smirk
See The World Through A Different Eye
See the world through a different eye, where reality and dreams collide. The sky is red instead of blue, what you see is not the truth. The sun is dark instead of light, the trees grow to enormous height. And life is not the way it seems, when you're living in a dream.
Like it? :) |
i like it a lot.
i want to see it illustrated as well!
how beautiful it would be.
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - June 8, 2007 01:47 PM (GMT)
Ultimate Katamari Lover <3 - June 12, 2007 09:21 PM (GMT)
Robot one:
I-549
I was lying in my bed,
utter silence in the night,
when I heard a sudden beeping noise
that gave me quite a fright.
"Who's there?" I asked aloud.
"I-549," It said.
"I must be hearing things," I thought,
"I'm scrambled in the head."
But alas, my thoughts are wrong,
a robot steps into my room,
I'll tell about my dream
when I wake up, and morning blooms.
That picture's from the comic book of a movie called Santa Claus Conquers the Martians, which I have not seen, and never will. :heh