Title: Character Contest continues
Description: Choose and Pick
japanese princess - January 24, 2006 02:33 AM (GMT)
Welcome Ladies and Gentle, now is your time to show off your skills.
Create a made up character and describe them by physical condition, powers, age, name, etc. On February 6, I will then cast a vote to see which character is the best of them all. Each member of this site will be able to vote once and have the chance to participate.
How ever, your character must be made up, and it cannot be an already made character. For an example, you cant use Inuyasha because he's an already made character (don't try to use a picture of an already made character and try to change his name, I will do Google search to make sure the character was stolen from another site, I want this to be a fair match). You must include an image of your character alone with information about the character as stated before. Have fun and enjoy!
u could use other people’s drawings from off the internet to represent your character. Just make sure u give full credit to the picture. But choose a picture of someone who isn't already famous. examples :Inuyasha, Ed, Naruto, etc.
When you are creating your character, Please do not create a new topic to posts your character. Just add reply and continue form there. That way people will get the chance to view all of the contestant's previous characters
If you do so, I will delete your topic, and PM you to give you the warning. If this same action is repeated, then You will atomatically be eliminated from the contest.
You are to post your images under the forum labeled CHARACTER CONTEST CONTINUES
Krazydog - January 24, 2006 02:44 AM (GMT)
Hmm... a picture is going to be slightly problematic. Seeing as that my computer with the internet is not the same computer with my scanner...
Do you want us to write out (or copy) all our character info on this page again? Or a brief summary? As for the pic, I'm going to have to work on that soon.
japanese princess - January 24, 2006 02:48 AM (GMT)
Just write the information like usual
Name:
Age:
Job:
It's still the same. Post the information like we always did it. In the same format located above
Krazydog - January 24, 2006 03:07 AM (GMT)
:o Huhhhh....... so its a summary, gotcha.
Name: Alastor
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Occupation: Heretic (Non-state Alchemist, since its illegal now for Alchemy to be practiced unless its for the state according to the RP backstory)
Race: Ishabalan
Origin: Ishbal, or one of the ishbal camps
Likes: Food, Soda and children/animals.
Dislikes: State Alchemists, fighting
Clothes: Long Black Trench coat, boots, Black sleeveless underneath, sunglasses.
Appearance: Long Dark hair and skin, red eyes that is hidden behind glasses.
Alastor is a very easy going character with a carefree nature. He dislikes State alchemists for destroying his people, but he doesn't show it outfront. He's wanted by the military for murder (?), Theft and various other crimes. Because he practice alchemy, he banished himself from his people. He wields the twin swords Melancholy and Midnight, one of the 5 sets of Alchemy swords of Xerxes. As of now, he is constantly searching for the other four. Anyone who gets in the way will not be very lucky.
Ironically his strong suit is his hand-to-hand combat and weapon mastery. So fighting him is a bad idea.
His medium talent is alchemy. He uses it on the defensive and doesn't like to fight.
Lowest is projectile skills, support Alchemy, and restorative alchemy.
he's a pacifist, and at times he falls asleep in unusual areas. he acts stupid/ lazy/ alzheimer for unknown reasons. Sometimes you can see him with a young girl named Kimio. Despite being dangerous, he's a nice guy to get to know and very polite.
[Picture coming soon...]
The Jewel Alchemist - January 24, 2006 04:34 AM (GMT)
Name: Tagalog name: Tanglao Mahalaga (Light preacious)
English Name: Jewel Eons
Military Alias: The Jewel Alchemist
Age:20
Job: She specialize in Mahalagang bato Ibahin direct translation is Gem Transformation, or Jewel Alchemy. Jewel Alchemy is where the people create gems that house alchemic catalysts, like the Philosopher's Stone. But these gems are not as powerful a catalyst as the Philosopher's Stone. They are found in a place far from central and are grown wildly in deep mines and caverns. They have been perfecting these gems and they are able to tweak the gems' chemical structure into a stable substance. What the gem's purpose is solely depends on what chemical they use to tweak it with like inserting nitroglycerin molecules would create an unstable explosive. (e.g. fast explosives, tiny smoke bombs, or lethal poisons...etc.) The gems are structured in such a way that it stays stable and allows other molecules to be inserted. She teaches the scientist at the military how to do this. Her real intentions are just to get money for her "feild studies" to find the forumula. She is stationed at the Lab and her rank at age 20 is Major Gerneral. Her officers in her group are loyal to her. She is respected as the first woman state alchemist, and a very good one at that.
Picture, look at my sig or for a bigger pic go to:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/26419523/
If the Extra Stuff violates the rules of this competition and results in disqualification then let me know and I will remove it.
Extra stuff
Bio: She is from the Tiisin tribe (the word means to suffer). This tribe based their lives on alchemy. They specialize in Mahalagang bato Ibahin direct translation is Gem Transformation, or Jewel Alchemy.
They are a warring tribe and specialize in creating powerful weapons that usually need alchemy to control them. They sell or trade their less powerful weapons to other tribes around them. They also have one special formula, that can create a Philosopher's Stone without the need of human sacrifice. They vow to protect the formula form foreign hands. Their government consists of elders who are chosen via the oracle to rule the tribe. The elders are the ones who control the use of the Stone. They only use the Power of the stone if dire situations call for it. This is because the chemical that is used to create this stone is scarce.
Since the life of the tribe is based on alchemy all children who do not have the ability to perform alchemy are exiled into the forest of darkness. Every child is given a certain weapon that foretells their destiny. It is given by an Oracle. The child needs the ability to use alchemy to use the weapon to it's full potential and to survive.
Her Weapon: Her weapon is called the Sandata (weapon) kay (of) Kapighatian (destruction). An explination of how the weapon works is on this site. Pic is here : http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/26502097/
Home Land: She is from an island far East of Xing. The Island is named Nawala, Nawala means Lost in Tagalog. This is a lush island, it is always hot there and has many typhoons. It's seasons consists of two types the rainy and dry seasons. The area is surrounded by vicious animals created by their ancestors who used alchemy on animals and plants to try and create a food source that provided all necessary vitamins and would never diminish over time or through the worst of storms.
Bio: Her whole tribe was killed by an army of foreigners who sought the Formula to create the Philosopher's Stone without the need for human sacrifice. She was in the woods gathering fire wood with her older brother when they attacked. They hid in their secret place which was a hole in the ground that they dug in the middle of lots of bushes. This was their secret club house. They heard screams and when they were sure that all enemies had left they came out. They saw blood stains all over the ground and bodies without bones. Her family was massacred. They looked for survivers but could not find anyone. They decided to resurrect their father since he knew the most about Alchemy and the world in general since he was chosen to be an elder. They found their father's body in the Elder's laboratory. She lost her brother and could not bind his soul to anything for there was nothing useful to bind it to. She then saw that her father was a monster coming to life. But the life of her brother wasn't enough it started to take her bones since the father didn't have any bones. she felt the pain and then grabbed the bag of incomplete alchemic gems next to her and transmuted them into her bones. She saw information pass by her eyes and suddenly she knew everything about other lands and alchemy. The monster began to walk, but she ran and burn the Elder's sacred hut to the ground. She then decided that it was not safe to stay there and so she gathered all the rations she could to journey out of the village. But she didn't know where to go suddenly she remembered that a stranger of white skin was taken into the medicinal hut and so she decided to look through his backpack. Perhaps she could escape to his homeland. She found a map of a strange land called Armisters (sp?) (The country where central is located.) A location was circled and by it was the words, "You are to report back to Major Hakuro in Central when you have found the information. Burn this map when you are done, you don't want anyone to follow you." She then took the compass, clothes, and map on her journey to this land. She thought that such nice things like the compass must come from a nice place. So she traveled there and became a state Alchemist known as The Jewel Alchemist. Since her bones are fragile and her body will one day reject the bones she must return herself to normal. If one bone breaks the shards of gems will destroy her internal organs. She seeks a body guard to watch her back while she tries to avenge her tribe and help her along her journey to find the Formula.
Family: A mother, father, three brothers and two sisters. She also has one other older brother but he was exiled when he was 10 because he could not do alchemy. All family of her's are assumed dead.
Personality:Very serious, good fighter and over-protective of the ones she loves. When we first meet her she thinks that now all of her family is gone all she lives for is to avange her tribe's death. This is her destiny and she sees it as once her destiny is complete there will be little reason to live. She is polite however, she is very secretive and only open to those who are very close to her. Her determination is her strength and yet a weakness, for she doesn't know when to quit. She thinks rationaly in dangerous situations, however behind a rough exterior lies a little girl frightened of the world, her trust is hard to gain with her past in mind. She tries to act like a Tiinsin, uncaring in the face of death with a thirst for war, but in the past years living the comforts of central she has grown soft. But no amount of comfort can make her past forgotten. For at night, she is haunted frequently by her memories of that fateful day where all she knew was drowned in blood.
Description: Long black-hair down to her waist, mysterious black eyes with a scar on her back to indicate that she is apart of her tribe. 5' 1" She is 13 when she becomes a State Alchemist and this is around when Edward is on his journey with Alphonse to find the Philosopher's Stone. She only wants to be a State Alchemist to gather funding and information about her tribe that was massacred when she was seven. She vows to find the killers and avenge her tribe. She also hears that someone might know the formula to create a Philosopher's stone without the aid of human sacrifices. The formula belonged to her tribe.
japanese princess - January 27, 2006 05:14 AM (GMT)
Some people misunderstood what i was trying to say. i mean u could use other peoples drawings from off the internet to represent ur character. Just make sure u give full credit to the picture. But choose a picture of someone who isn't already famous for an example inuyasha or Edward Elric. Catch my drift? :lol: :D :P .
kyraillion - January 27, 2006 10:42 PM (GMT)
I posted my character profile a long time ago under the old topic board and I'm still waiting to get accepted. Do I need to move it here?
japanese princess - January 30, 2006 04:27 AM (GMT)
yes, that way everyone can see it, and vote for it! ;)
japanese princess - January 31, 2006 01:51 AM (GMT)
You don't have to write down the site or the name. i mean you could. But i just want you to say something like, i found this picture on line or something like that.
Dread - January 31, 2006 02:19 AM (GMT)
Item: Various bombs
Description: Different types of bombs, from smoke bombs to fire bombs. Rayanna makes these bombs herself.
Character in use: Rayanna and Lena
Cost: (Only a mod or admin can give an item a Price.)
Uses: Once.
Weapon: Sythe
Description: The Sythe Rayanna uses is coated in poison. By doing that, she can easily poison an enemy. The Sythe are made of a rare black metal alloy, which her sister supplies her with if it gets broken.
Character in use: Rayanna
Offensive ability: (given by mods/admin depending on description)
Durability: (given by mods/admin depending on description)
Cost: (given by mods/admin depending)
Name: Rayanna Delph
Age: 16
Sex: Female
Height:5’7
Allias: Homunculus, Dread
Job: Theif
Archetype: Martial Arts Expert
Rank: None
Money: Random, depends on how much she gets from someone

Physical Description: Long, blonde hair, blue eyes with gold flecks. Slim, athletic figure. Red orobrous on right ankle, which makes it very easy to hide. Wears black leather pants with a brown belt, which contains various home made bombs, black boots, and a black one shoulder shirt, that stops right above her belly button, also wears clothing shown in the above picture.
Weapons & Accessories: Bombs, Kunai
Ability Tree: Hand to Hand Combat Specialist
Strong ability: Strength
points:
Medium Ability: Knowlege
points:
Weak ability: Determination
points:
Homunculus Power: Controlling Weather
Personality: Rayanna is basicly a mask. She tries her best to hide her emotions, thinking they would the in the way in battle. And, by doing so, she has no friends. She is smart, understands alchemy, even though she can’t use it, and has much wisdom. Rayanna, or Dread, is easy to depress, even though she may not show it. Rayanna will usually try and avoid a fight, unless it involves her only her younger, 13 year old sister, Lena, who is the only one she will openly show emotion for. Rayanna isn’t bloodthirsty or evil, but just wants to find out and understand her purpose in life and will do anything to do so, even kill. Rayanna cares only for herself, her sister, and any friends she may actually get. In her own veiw, Rayanna thinks she is just merely a shell, looking for something unreachable.
Biography: Rayanna, or Dread, is a Homunculus, who was created by her sister Lena, who is a great alchemist, a Heretic not with the Heretic rebellion. One bright, hopeful day, when Lena was 10, and Rayanna 13, they were going to go out and travel the streets pickpocketing like usual, when the Military stormed in their small, temporary home, saying they were hiding Heretics.
The Military threatened them, saying that they will kill them if they do not tell them where they were. Rayanna, being a…determined, easy to anger girl, yelled at them to to leave. A Military officer brought a gun to Lena’s head, saying he will kill her, if Rayanna didn’t tell. Rayanna jumped at the unsuspecting Military officer, causing all the other officers to fire at Rayanna in panic, thus killing Rayanna and giving enough time for Lena to escape, unnoticed.
Lena, couldn’t bear to live without Rayanna, her only known living realitve, ever since her parents died in a crossfire between the Military and a bunch of thieves. Lena the next day, came back to her home to find that the Military officers left, and Rayanna’s almost destroyed corpse. She dragged Rayanna’s corpse in an abandoned house, and put her body in a freezer to preserve it.
Over the next few weeks, Lena gathered Alchemic materials for the forbidden act,
Human Transmutation.
Other Info: Rayanna and her sister are poor, therefore the only way they can live is to steal and pickpocket, which is a very useful skill for Rayanna. Rayanna’s usual pickpocketing victims are State Alchmists, because she knows how much the Heretics would pay for their pocket watches.
Writing Example:
Chapter 1
The Beginning
‘Finally,’ thought Lena, after drawing a complicated transmutation circle,’ it is complete. Now all I have to do is drag my sister’s body into the middle of the circle, make it thaw faster, and heal her wounds. Then I will try and call my sister’s soul back to her body!’
Lena started to carefully drag the body into the middle of the circle, hoping she wasn’t damaging it. When the body got to the exact middle of the circle, Lena took out a simple piece of white chalk.
She started to draw two circles, less complicated than the one she was standing in. Lena looked at her handiwork on her sister’s stomach and congratulated herself. Lena took out a Alchemy book and checked to see if everything was was in order. It was.
“Soon, sister, and we will meet again.” Lena smiled, putting away the Alchemy book back into her homemade backpack, taking out red glowing stones in the process.
“These stupid stones better be worth what that shady merchant said.” Lena whispered, putting the stones around Rayanna’s body.
Lena placed her hands on the first circle, and the thawing process quickend. She placed her hands on the second circle, all of Rayanna’s fatal wounds healing. Lena stood up, walked to the outside of the huge circle, and kneeled back down again.
“You shall live again, my sister.” Lena screamed, slamming her hands on the circle.
A purple light appeared, taking Lena in front of a huge gate. Lena’s eyes widened, speechless, at the infinite, white space all around her. She approached the Gate, almost naturally, afraid of what was behind it.
“W-where am I?” stuttered Lena, looking at the Gate.
No one answered.
The Gate opened, black arms grabbing her, pulling her in to nothingness. Lena screamed and watched as the arms snaked around her, as a yellow light started to glow in the distance. Images went through Lena’s head, images of life and death, Alchemy, and so much more. Lena screamed once more, before falling unconscious.
Lena awakened, hours later, on the floor of the abandoned house. The red stones were gone and infront of her was a shivering naked body.
Lena’s eyes widenend.
“Rayanna."
japanese princess - February 2, 2006 06:09 AM (GMT)
There are only 5 more days remainning until the voting begins, and no more contestants will be allowed to compete.
Good luck to you all and may the best win! ;)
japanese princess - February 5, 2006 10:44 PM (GMT)
The Contest Ends tomorrow at 6pm. So if you want to see if you have what it takes to create the best character this forum has ever seen, then make sure you post today ;)