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Title: My Story
Description: I just wrote this a few days ago


Aly - December 14, 2005 09:31 PM (GMT)
The fullmetal Alchemist

On a Sunny Day of 1905, Edward Elric, The oldest sibling, Was racing his younger brother Alphonse to their friend Winry's house. When they got there, Winry was already waiting. It was her birthday, And the two boys, Edward and Alphonse Elric, Were going to go see her .. They had something special planned for her. Edward first picked a spot. he took out his chalk. He started drawing a weird circle, also known as a Transmutation circle, and Winry then said: "what is that? Im bored!" "Winry im not done yet, you'll see what it is in a few seconds!" Edward responded. When he was done drawing the Transmutation circle, He and His brother put their hands on the circle.. Suddenly, a Bright light Lit the Room. Winry got scared, her dog, Den, was barking, She started Crying. They suddenly stopped the transmutation and went to go help Winry. With the thing on the floor they just made, was a Doll For little winry. "Edward and Alphonse werent trying to scare you, Winry." sara Rockbell said. "theres no doubt about it. this is a talent. " Pinako said as she walked in the room, holding the Doll. "look at this work!" she said. "i know. they shouldnt know anything about alchemy!" trisha Elric said in awe. "they certainly are his sons!" pinako said. Later on that week, Edward and Alphonse were going to see winry again. when they entered, "what do you mean ... dead?" Al said "dont be stupid, al! My parents are dead! my mom and dad are dead!" She screamed. "but.. ... how?" edward said. "They went to go be surgeons in ishbal.. *sniff* it was a surprise attack!" Winry said im a quavery voice. "but they cant be dead" al said. "THERE NEVER COMING BACK AL!" winry screamed. "thats not nessicerialy true.. theres this thing called a humonculous without a mind to begin with but if we can do it with alchemy---" Edward said. "there will be no talking about that in this house!" pinako boasted. "backwards old bat." edward said in a snobby voice. the two boys were then bombarded with pots and pans everywhere being thrown at them. then on their way up to their house, Ed saw his mother, walking around picking apples from the apple tree. ed then started getting tears in his eyes and ran up to his mother. Al did the same. "whats wrong al? even you ed? whats wrong ? your my little man what could be the matter?" trisha asked. the two boys were just crying into her apron. later that day, Ed and Al were down by the lake. They were picking fruits. They went home . "Hi mom, Sorry were late!" ed yelled. Then he saw his mother sprawled on the ground. "mom! mom! mom!!!!!!!!" ed yelled. "MOM! MOMMY!!!!!" al yelled. Then they called the rockbells for help. They quickley got Trisha to The rockbells for care. She had a really big fever, Sweating alot, too. "theres...money...in the .... closet.....i've never....touched it.......i've been...saving it.. for you ... two...use it, ...please." trisha said. "dont be silly, we'll use it with you!" ed said. "be a.. sweetheart....and...make.. something.. for.. your......dear mothe.r..yes... i know.. a ring..of flowers would... be nice.. *ed gaspes* You.. know..Your.....father...always..used..to..make...them...for...me." trisha said. then, the grip on her older son's hand loosened. Trisha Elric, Had just died.
At her funeral, Ed didnt cry. who knows why. but al cried waterfalls. approx. 1 month after Trisha's death, the two boys started to study Human Alchemy.
It was the day when the rain would not let up. The people of Resembool had trouble keeping the river barracades intact. So ed and al decided to go help . "boys, stop!" pinako yelled. "were going to go help!" ed yelled. the River was raging, almost flooding the tiny village of Resembool. Ed and Al had their Trasmutation circle ready. They Transmuted a wall around the river. suddenly, it broke and all the water came towards them. then, A lady with dark brown hair appeared and saved the two boys. "are you two okay?" she said. "ya" the two boys replied. just then, the lady did a transmutation (without a circle) and transmuted a wall much bigger than what the elric brothers had made. Then, she coughed up blood and was emmidiatly rushed to the hospital. "thanks for saving this town! this town wouldve been under water if you hadent been there!" a villiager said. "may we ask your name?" another said. "izumi curtis." she responded. "make way- coming through, excuse me!" ed yelled at the top of his lungs. "hm?" izumi said. "We wanna be your apprenices!.. haha.. if you'll take us.." ed said. "no. i have a store to run and im not going to take any students." izumi said. "what?! why?!" Ed and Al yelled. "and why do you want to be my aprentices?" she asked. "we wanna....help others out!" Ed said. "we already know a little alchemy, but we need to know more!" al yelled. "do you have your parents permission?" izumi asked. "im afraid they have no parents. i've been looking after them since their mother passed on." pinako said walking into the room. "it always happenes.. im just too nice. Im going to take them for 1 month. is it ok if i have them for that long? i need to test their abilities to see if they have the right talents to know alchemy." izumi said. "and what happenes if they dont?" pinako said. "then im sending them back here." izumi said. then when they boarded the train..."you do know were not coming back in a month dontcha?" ed said. "haha i knew you'd say that!" pinako said. "TRAINING TRAINING" ed said . "TRAINING TRAINING" al said. "do you think we'll get to read alot of books?" Al asked his brother. "i bet theres a whole factory- No a whole library of alchemy books!" Ed said. "o ya, teacher- when we were at the river, you used alchemy without a transmutation circle- are you a state alchemist?" al asked in curiousity. "STATE ALCHEMISTS ARE FOUL THUGS WHO ARE GIVEN ORDERS TO KILL SOMEONE WHEN THE COLONEL TELLS THEM THAT THE CERTAIN PERSON IS BAD!" izumi yelled at the top of her lungs and scared half the train and almost made Ed and Al wet themselves. When they got off the train at a big lake (also known as Lake gitche gumee.. or lake superior) and they got on a boat. izumi then stopped at an inhabitant island and dumped the two boys off. "you two have to stay here for 1 month all by yourselves!" izumi said throwing ed a knife. "and i forgot to mention. NO ALCHEMY.!" izumi yelled. "WHAT?!" the two boys screamed and made all the birds leave the island and about i think china heard them. "you have to learn what all is one and one is all means." izumi said. by the time it was 6:00 pm, they were so hungry they couldnt see. they went fishing and ed sat there for hours. "Im starting to wonder if soxes are edible!" he said. "just be patient, brother!" al said. when they didnt catch anything, they went to bed. "all is one and one is all, huh? man that lady sure gave us weird homework.." ed said snobbily. when they finally drifted off, ed heard a rustling sound "needa restroom, al?" he asked. then when he saw al laying beside him, he looked up to see something really big and looked like a wild animal. Ed quickley pulled al from where he was laying. " go to the bathroom by yourself, brother.." al said groggily. "you idiot! wake up!" ed yelled. Al quickley woke up and saw the hideos .. whatever it was... They both ran seperate directions. Ed was looking for al. "haa.. wild creature if you are there i'll kill you myself.." he said in sheer terror. then a hand shot out and pulled ed by the back of the shirt. " o no you dont wanna eat me i taste terribla AHAHA AHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" he screamed. "brother its just me so shut up!" al said. " o al i was afraid you got lost or something!" ed said. "SHH!!" Al said frantically as the wild animal drew closer. they quickly dove behind a tree and hid. They closed each others mouth as their teeth chattered in fear. The Monster went away after a few minutes past of looking for the two boys. The next day, they tried to catch something to eat. they caught a bunny and they didnt know what to do. Just then, a fox came and stole the bunny! They chased the fox "hey come back! thats ours!" then the fox quickley turned around and lunged at the two boys. He bit Ed hard on the shoulder. "that stupid fox!" ed said. then he started chasing the fox. "idiot.. your going to get bit again.." Al said in a murmuring voice. "when i find that fox, im bitin' it back!" Ed said in anger. ..and in pain.. "*gasp* brother, Look!" Al said. Ed looked and saw the fox with the bunny.. three baby foxed popped up and ate it..>< cute but gross. "she has babies!" ed said. as the foxes ate the bunny a squishing.. EW.. "yuck.. lets pass on the meat and eat fish instead." ed said in disgust. When they couldnt catch anything, they just went to bed.. "al why are we here again i dont rumembur.." ed said. "i dont know this sucks i wanna go home!" Al said. Then the Big huge whatever it was attacked them again. Ed, frantic to save al, Was punched in the stomach really hard with the ,... whatever it is's club. He lie there Stiff, in pain. hearing his brother scream in pain, He then thought *death. Death.* then saw the image of his mother than got up really fast (cuz he had an idea) and Punched the whatever it is in the head. He then let go of al. then ed took out the knife. "you let go of my brother!" he yelled. Then The whatchamacallit walked away.. When the month was over, (i know, big skip.. -.-''') Izumi came back and said: "do you know what all is one, and one is all means?" "The world is all!" Al said. "and I am the one!" Ed said. Mason and Izumi both laughed and said "ok , lets start your training!" the two boys smiled..When they got to izumi's, Izumi kept winning the battles. "have you ever wanted to bring someone dead back to life?" Ed asked. izumi punched him. "what does this have to do with my question anyway?" Ed said lunging at izumi while she was holding the cookbook. Ed threw the cookbook up into the air.. tried to hit izumi, Izumi grabbed his arm and threw him down.. like the wreselers do X3 !!! "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" ed screamed. then al lunged at izumi and then izumi took his hand and threw him into the bush. 2 seconds later, she caught the falling cookbook. When the month of training was over, Ed and Al went on to something more forbidden than ever, they decided to bring their mother back from the dead. Sulfur, 80 grams. Salt, 20 grams. Iodine, 10 Grams. sodium, 5 grams, salpeder, 15 Grams, Iron, 20. and trace amounts of 15 other elments. thats what they thought made up a adult human body. When they drew the circle and started, and then, the bright yellow light turned to a dangerous black and purple, whishing and swirling around them! wite lightning ! Ed looked at the alchemy book and its pages were turning! then he heard his brother scream. He was being pulled into the circle! "No al!" he reached out for his brother, but he faded away. He was then infront of the gate. as he saw his brother go away, his left leg deteriated and was given to the gate as a sacrifice for his mother. Then he Drew transmutation circles on his arms and chest. "bring him back. bring alphonse back!" he said as he transmuted a body of armor. When he was in front of that gate again, he sacrificed his Right arm for al's soul. "al...al...im sorry!" he said in a painful voice. the thought he was going to die. Then al saved him. took him to the rockbells. when he was at the rockbells door, "please, help him! he's going to bleed to death!" al said in a sad and frantic voice. "al.. is that you?" winry said. "we had no idea you were back from training! you were trying to bring back your mother , werent you?!" pinako said in an angry voice. as they layed ed down on the bed, they wrapped his wounds up with many bandages to stop the bleeding. Then, that night, A state alchemist dropped by. "my my.. a human transmutation.. i've never seen such a furious reaction before.." he said. "who are you?" pinako said. the man held up a state alchemist pocketwatch. "i am lieutenant colonel roy mustang from the central command center. you can pay me a visit anytime there.." roy said. Ed wasnt unconsious.. he was concious to her that part! The next day, winry walked into the room that ed and al were in. winry 'examinined' al and looked at him in curoiusity.. she then sat on him and starting bouncing. "g'morning winry!" he said. "EEEKKK!! al your on!!---- i mean your awake.!! haha.." winry said in a freaked out vioce. Ed was watching.. muhahahaha! Then pinako walked in. "so what are you planning to do?" she asked. "i'll pay you. For Automail." Ed said. winry and pinako gasped and said "ok!" "i dont wanna carry around these stubs!" ed said. So later on, they started working on his automail. He bashed and Squirmed because it hurt so bad. "please ed! stay with us! its the highest quality of automail!" winry yelled. "this pains' nothing!" Ed said. then Al creaked through the door. "al stay out!" the he got scared and walked out. "im surprised.. even adults are part of this part of the operation. "this pain is really nothing. compared of what he's lost." ed said. When they were done attaching all of his veins and nerves to the wires in the automail, Ed and Al skermished a bit. "why do you wanna become a state alchemist so bad? are you planning on brining mom back to life again?" al said. "no.. its to risky. we need to find the philosophers stone so we can do it without any sacrifice ! and we need to get our bodies back to normal!" Ed said. "then i'll become one too!" al said. "you cant." ed said. "why not, brother? i can help you!" al said. then ed kicked al into the river. "never leave your gaurd down." ed said laughing. Later on, They started out for a town. they were meant to meet a man named Muhguiar. He was an alchemist. When they got there, a bunch of little boys and girls pushed al down. ....-.-''' right on top of ed. when they met muhguiar, He had lost a love, called katherine. He failed to notice that the woman thats been beside him was katherine. Then, the little girl who was being mean to the elric brothers were brought to say sorry. "its all Katherines fault! she died and then started killing the village girls! even my sister! i might be next! even you! *she points at ed* " said clause. "Im not a girl!!!!!!!!" ed yelled. "oops.." clause said. Then she started running. "hey hold on!" ed yelled after her. then he started running after her. She slipped and fell and came close to falling in the river. Ed transmuted it into solid. "thanks for saving my life!" she said. Later on, They snuk into muhguiars mansion, and in the basement, he was trying to make a living doll. Ed went to the basement and muhguiar thought he was a girl and tied him to the chair in the middle of the transmutation circle. "now, little girl, you will sacrifice your soul for my catherine!" muhguiar yelled. "IM NOT A FRIKKIN GIRL!" ed yelled. "Muhgiuar, stop! Im Katherine! stop it stop it stop it! im not dead!" katherine yelled. "k.k.k.katherine? is that really you? ......?" muhgiuar asked. "yes, let the boy go! " katherine said. then shoved a big kife through muhgiar. muhguiar then died... al untied ed and then they went to the train station. "yes sir! uh.. which train should we go on??" ed asked Lt. Col. Roy mustang. "this train." roy said. they thought it would be peaceful, until some thugs showed up. ed and al were forced to put their hands up. when the guy with the gun came up to ed..."*gasp* LOOK! *ed points to something*" ed yelled. Then hekicked the guy in the face. "i'll throw a surprise party on top, you stay down." ed said. Then he climbed on top of the train. while he was walking, a tree branch came up and made him fall off. Maes hughes quickley caught him. "who are you?" ed asked. "im maes hughes. agood friend of roy mustang." he said. "the .. lieutenanant maes hughes??????!!" ed said. "ya.. are you ok?" maes asked. "ya im fine.. ><" ed said. Then he climbed on top of the train again. the guy with a big gun saw him. "well, lookie here." he said. then he shot at ed and got him in the shoulder. "ow!" ed said. "HEY! you ok??" maes asked. "ya! im ok!" ed said. then he transmuted a cannon. He set it off and hit the guy square in the head. Muhahaha... ed laughed. then he transmuted a big microphone inside the train. "can evryone hear me ok? this is going to bea bumpy ride, so get ready for some turbulance!" then he transmuted a pipe and let in alot of water from lake Giche Gumee. He washed all the thugs out and left the passengers unwet..lol
When they arrived at central, Roy showed up there, as well. he burned the thug. lol
"im roy mustang. you can call me satan, roy, or heck, you can call me the flame alchemist." roy said. "ROY! YOU KNEW WE WERE GOING TO TAKE THIS TRIP SO YOU PUT USIN DANGER! YOU ARE A JERK. !!! " ed yelled. "you can take the test. its not my problem if you decide to take it. Im not trying to run your life.:" roy said. "but you said we could always take it! " ed yelled.

2 days later., they were placed at the tucker mansion to study for the alchemy exam. when ed saw the house, he almost passed out. it was so big! then when he saw the Library he ran towards a big shelf of alchemy books for young alchemists. At midnight, they were still reading. Nina walked in and said : "whatcha doin?" "reading.." ed said. then they went to bed a few minutes later. The next day, they immediatly started. the clock struck noon. "its that late already?" ed said. then he went outside to see a big white sheet over the ground. "SNOW!!!" he yelled. then maes hughes came around the corner. "hiya ed! happy birthday!" he said. "what?! but i never told anyone about that?!" Ed yelled. "im in the investigations department. " maes said. Due to your birthday, your invited to come to our house for a big feast!" maes said. "WOW!" nina said. "whats a feast without ed's friends?" maes said. When they arrived at the hughes's house, Ed saw his wife, gracia. "WOW.. your stomach is a melon!" ed said. "yes the baby is due any day now!" gracia said. "ok guys. the meal is almost done!" maes said. Then they were all in the dining room. "anyone want some tea?" gracia said as she walked into the room. "we sure would!" maes said. Then gracia screamed.. "its here.. " she said. "what, the tea?" maes said. " no the baby!!!" gracia said. everyone gasped and then their was silence. "ill go get the doctor!!!" maes said as he broke the silence barrier. Ed, Al , and Nina were left taking care of gracia. "AHHH!!! i can feel its head!!!" she screamed. "o no!! she can feel its head!!" ed yelled. "AHH!! im GONNG DIE!!" gracia yelled. Nina started crying and Ed and Al started running around in circles. "little big brother, the water is very cold!" nina said. Ed picked up the water bucket and .. transmuted it warm without a transmutation circle! "wow brother! how did you do that??!" al yelled. "i dont know it just happened!" ed yelled. theni maes arrived with the doctor. the doctor deilivered gracia's baby without any trouble at all. it was a girl. they named her elysia.

1 day after, maes was with ed. Ed asked him about the talking chimera that tucker made. "well you do live with the guy why dont you ask him?" maes asked. "well,. he's all busy.. " Ed said. Then the phone rang. the conversation:
maes: what?!
other guy: A kill was near mea!
Maes: a kill?! AH HECK!
Ed gasped and maes hung up the phone. they raced to the kill scene. The little boy who had lost his mother was sitting there. "mom. MOM!" he said. then riza tried to lift the little boy off of his mother. the boy pulled off the sheet that was covering his mom. as soon as ed saw it, he remembered his mom. he got really freaked out and passed out. when he woke up, he was at the tuckers with shou tucker sitting beside him. "you must've seen something reall horrible." he said. "now i know what you boys did. when i saw your bodies, i knew." he said again. Later on, as soon as the alchemy exam came up, someone messed up on their transmutation and almost killed themselves, and ed did a transmutation without a circle and saved him. he passed immediatly for that. he went back to the tuckers with his state alchemist pocketwatch. then all of a sudden, alexander the dog took it away.
alexander!! ed yelled.

Two years later, (i know.. big skip)
The elric brothers were almost finding the philosophers stone. They decided to check out lab 5. merg.. ed was 15 and the nect day was his birthday. Ed had to crawl through the tunnel (pipe) and he mokked himself "its actually a good thing im little if i wouldve been normal sized we wouldve called this whole thing off." AHHH!! " no its not! then he started squirming. When he reached the hallway, he accidentally stepped on a trap and a bunch of metal sticks fell from the cieling. then he stepped on another and the floor caved. then when he stepped on another, a big boulder came rolling towards him. AHHHH!! he yelled. then he squeezed in the corner to avoid the boulder.. ! then when he got to the big large room, he was greeted by a guy in armor. The guy in armor came after ed with his sword. "one on one, eh?" ed said. then he transmuted his arm into a sword. the fight lasted a long time. after a while, ed's automail cracked. the guy shoved his sword into ed and made him bleed. alot.. and then he slashed ed's side. he cornered ed, and ed cut him in half. with alchemy.. and when it was over, ed poked the bottom half with his foot. "there.. is not a third brother.. is there?" he asked. "for heaven sakes no." then the youngest brother killed himself and then Ed took the older one to the philosophers stone ingerdients, there, was envy and all the other humonculous. it was ed's chance to get al's body back. but he hesitated. envy kicked him in the stomach. "YOU SHALL DIE FOR HAVING THAT IDIOTS BLOOD RUNNING THROUGH YOUR VEINS!" than she kicked him in the face. "envy. stop. we need to make him live." said lust. just then, gluttony carried al into the room with him all battered up. gluttony had practically ate him. Ed was about to do it then his automail broke in half. Just then, a big explosion happend and the red water tanks broke. the red water almost hit lust. then, Scar appeared and said: "fullmetal. get your brother and get out of here!" he said. "I DONT NEED YOUR HELP!" he said. "maybey not, but your brother needs your help!" and then ed ran to go get al then he stepped into the red water. his alchemy power increased rapidly. "that much exposure to the liquid , he could become a god!" envy said. just then, the military walked in. maria ross ran to ed and hugged him. the light went away as the pain did too. "mom..your..back.." he said in a murmuring voice not knowing it was ross. He passed out.
When he woke up the next day, he then got up real fast and said: WHERES AL??????!
and havok moved out of the way. there al sat, all battered up. "thats the second time you got broken. i'll fix you as soon as i can." ed said. "ya." al said. "...what happened, ed?" havok asked. "nothing much." ed said. "Nothing much?! you and your brother were seriously injured!" havok yelled. "fullmetal sir! i apologize in advance for this!" said ross. then she immediatly slapped ed across the face. "You nearly died and you put your brother at risk! you should .. trust adults with a little more respect." ross said. "your right. im sorry." Ed said. Ross smiled.
ed went to the phones and called winry the next day. conversation:
Winry: Hi! Rockbell automail and metal outfitters how may i help you?
Ed: uh, Winry..
Winry: *gasps* Ed! Hi there..
Ed: ya.. i got some sort of a problem.. i cant move my arm anymore..
Winry: sounds right..
Ed: whaddya mean?
Winry: nothin..
Ed: well.. i cant make it out to resembool right now so im in need of a fix..
Winry: dont worry! i'll come to you! just stay there and i'll jump on the train today!
Ed: your being unusually nice..
Winry: dont be silly ed im always nice! CYA!
-End of conversation-

*winry arrives at central*
"ed! whats happned to you??!" winry yelled when she saw ed. "haha one thing led to another.." ed said. "this is no laughing matter." said winry. "whats wrong?" asked ed. "i didnt do the matinance right on your automail like i shouldve." said winry. "what do you mean?! your matinance has always been good! it broke becausei was wreckless!!" ed said. Winry's thought: "did he really not realize that i forgot to use that screw? *ping!*" YES ED A WRECKLESS CLUTZ YOU ARE!!" said winry. "ya.. realy.." ed said in an angry voice.
Later on, when ed ate his supper, winry walked in and noticed he forgot to drink the milk. "you left the milk." Winry said . "*shiver*" Ed shivered. "you know i hate milk it tastes like vomit." ed said. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN ITS GOOD FOR YOU DRINK IT!" winry yelled. "AHH!! I WILL NEVER DIRNK ANYTHING THAT WAS TAKEN FROM A COW!" ed yelled. "THEN YOU WILL ALWAYS BE A BEAN!" winry said. "A BEAN?" ed yelled. "yeah. a bean." winry said.
aftert that dilemma, Winry started to fix ed's automail. when she was done,ed and winry went up to the roof and fixed al. ed transmuted al back to normal. "this is how you made me this way?!" al said. "well ya.." ed said. "but how do i know that?! you probaly created my soul!" al yelled. "thats not true!" ed said. "what ed was trying to tell you was that--"winry said. "stop lying to me!" al said. "give me the truth, Edward Elric!" al yelled again. then he started to walk away and ed grabbed hold of him. al pushed him away and ed grabbed him again. al turned around and punched ed in the face. "alphonse.. i'm..." then al jumped off the building. "alphonse!" AL!"ALLL!!!!!!!" winry was holding ed back from jumping off , too.
2 days later, they found alphonse fighting some guy because he kidnapped an ishbalan child. the guy shot at al but it didnt hurt him. the other guy, barry the chopper, ran towards al. "you leave him alone!" ed yelled as he punched barry in the stomach and transmuted a wall infront of them. "AL! all this time i wanted to tell you something but i've been afraid of what your reaction would be. Do you hate me? i just gotta know .. do you hate me for all thats happened?" ed said while crying. "what?! i could never - i could never hate you!" al said while punching barry in the face and breaking barry's blood seal. barry then died.. and then when they were done with all the fighing, they went to the river to say goodbye to the ishbalans. they were headed to the south ishbalan headquaters. "eh scar. did the military make the philosophers stone and then you decided to go take it?" ed asked. "no fullmetal. its the other way around." scar said. "but did you create one.?" ed asked. "we should get going" scar told the other ishbalans. "hey ! i want an answer!" ed yelled. "brother. let him go. they need scar more." al said. "your right.. lets go home." ed said. "hey.. i just remembered something... we used to fight over the dumbest things, didnt we?" ed said. "ya, like who would get the toys.!" al said. "HA! i lost that one.. hahah" ed said. "and what about that time when we fought over the candy- i won!" al said. "haha we even had fighs on who would marry winry! that time we had our first fist fight!" ed said. "muahahha.. i remember that! you used to kick and punch each other over me!" winry said.

the next day they left for rushvalley. When they got there, everyone was automail-arm-wrestlesing. When there were no more challengers, the guy said: "nah i couldnt ask this shrimpo!" whiel looking at ed. "WHO ARE YOU CALLING A SHRIMP SO SMALL AND LITTLE AND WITHOUT A HEAD AND COULD BE SQUISHED!!!!!!!" ed yelled as al held him back. "and looks like you got that automail from a scrapheap!" he said. "Alphonse- LET GO OF YOUR BROTHER. " winry said in a mean voice. "yes winry" . al said as he put ed down. "Ed! if you lose i'll kick your @$$!" winry yelled. Ed was too angry to care. he was so angry he accepted the challenge and ripped the guy's automail off! "now who's automail belongs in a scrapheap? o ya. YOURS!" ed screamed. "HA! take that!" winry screamed. on their way to the hotel, the two guys who lost and had to give up 10 thousand cens, came up and said: "you cheated! we know for a fact that little runt used alchemy!" the 1 guy said. "HA! and you used alchemy to cheat people out of their money!" Ed said. "Ed.?" winry said. "ya?" ed said. then all of a sudden winry hit ed with her wrench. "did you know about this al? winry asked. "ya.." al said. then winry hit him, too. ed got up and said "what are you trying to do, kill me with the new wrench i got for you?" "maybey!" she yelled and hit him again. the two guys hugged eachother and screamed. winry hit them as well. she went away for the night and found the little girl who broke her automail in the championships, and offered to fix it for her. the next day, she found ed and al and took paninya with her. "ed! can i see your pocketwatch?" asked winry. "ya but you can only look not touch." ed said. just then,. paninya took ed's pocketwatch and ran away with it. on their race to the pawnshop, paninya got lost and ed raced past her and grabbed his pocketwatch back. then he tripped and fell off of a building.. Luckily, al caught ed. winry said a thousand sorries before ed told her to shut up. they went to the hotel, and winry asked if ed appreciated her automail. then she asked him if he wanted to come back to resembool and he said: "nah.. i'll pass.." "but why?" winry said. "dont you appreciate my work? i'll study harder and become better than the big city dealers.. " she said as she started to cry. "winry.. your automail is the best! really!" ed said. then all of a sudden al bursted into the room . "brother! your not going to believe who's here!" then all of a sudden, sigu curtis stepped into the room. Ed got scared. "if he's here.. than ...." ed said. then he started running and tried to escape out the window. izumi kicked him in the face and sent him flying. "and where do you think you'r going , ed?" Izumi asked. "WHERE IS ALPHONSE?" she yelled. "MAM!" alphonse yelled. " o i want to thank you for escorting us here. now can you tell me where alphonse is?" izumi asked. "uh, im alphonse.. " al said as he started sweating furiously.. "yes thats right now as i was saying..,HM?? HIDING IN DISGUISES NOW, ARENT YOU??????!" izumi yelled as she threw alphonse o the other side of the room. Ed hid behind winry and shook his head. izumi kidnapped the two boys and took them to her home town. "hi izumi!" mason said as he walked up to izumi , ed , Winry, sigu, and al. "hey there mason!" ed said. "hi edward! i've seen you havent grown in years since i last saw you!" mason said as he was patting ed's head. "haha.. he loves to make me angry.." ed said. "hey- who's your armoured friend?" mason said. "its me mason.. his younger brother alphonse.." al said. "wow! thats one heckuva gorwth spurt!" mason said. "teacher!" maddie said as she was running up to them. "hey there maddie! how's chico?" izumi asked. "she's gonna have babies soon!" maddie said as she was poitning to her cat, chico. "wow your house will be crowded!"

Later, as they were eating, Ed wasnt eating. "why arent you eating , ed?" winry asked. "eat it now, ed." izumi said. "yes maa'm." ed said as he started eating.
the next day, Izumi and sigu put Ed and Al back on the Inhabitant island. ed and al started looking for the masked man that had attacked them when they were little. a while later, when al was cooking fish, he came back and the fish was gone. he went over to ed and pulled at his ear. "Ed! you ate the fish before supper time!" al said as he scolded ed. "but i didnt do that. look. its a right hand." ed said as he showed the diffrence between his right hand and the one on the ground. "it must be that masked man." al said. "i doubt it." ed said. "al.. Lets escape!" ed said. "what?! are you crazy?! i cant swim!" al said. "huh.. come to think of it, neither can i!
When the month passed .. again.. (a big skip) izumi said "did you learn it? that it was forbidden to do what you did?" "yes.................We've known that for a long time now, izumi." izumi felt stupid and kicked ed.

a week later, when they finally shook izumi off, Ed ..killed greed.. surpisingly...... because greed kidnapped al and kicked ed's butt so .. it was time..lol
a few days after that, Ed and Al went to go save some ishbalans by ruining the train and giving LT. Fuhry a big bruise, Winry came in a tractor and gave ed and al one heckuva ride.. went realllyyyy fast and she was headed right for a train. as soon as it almost hit, winry swerved off of the tracks and went faster. after she gave Ed and Al a ride, Ed got in trouble for giving LT. Fuhry a bruise.. and Winry suddenly figured out that maes hughes has been klled, and that her parents were killed by roy mustang.
2 days later, Ed and Al's tractor broke down . "that stupid winry!" ed said. the tractor was broken.. he tapped it and then punched it. it blew up .

part 2. By the rivers edge
Ed and al got into an alchemy fight. heres how it started:
"brother.. are you sure its ok to do this?" al asked
"ya. what else?" ed said
"but they wouldnt sell a car to a bunch of kids.." al said
"maybey not.." ed said..
"brother.. what are we going to do after we get our bodies back?" al asked
"i dont know why dont you tell me, AL?" ed said as he transmuted something around al
then Al transmuted hands with water buckets and poured water on ed.
then ed transmuted al into a hole
and al did the same
ed transmuted a cage around al and walked away.

Ed didnt notice at all. when he was eating he wasd like: al , pass the salt.
then when he saw that al wasnt there he grabbed his pocketwatch and went to go looking for him. then he remembered what had happened a few years ago.
Trisha: edward! edward! have you seen alphonse i cant find him anywhere!
Ed: i dont know and i certainly dont care
Trisha: did you get into a fight?
Ed: ya. he kept asking me when dad was coming home
Trisha: ya that can be hard.. if only i knew where to find him.
and ed found al by the river's edge.
he got an idea and went to go look for al by the river.
he found al sitting by the river transmuting small objects.
when al saw ed he got into fighting position.
"lets go." ed said.
and then they were off. the only problem was- they didnt have a car and they had to get through the desert to ishbal. just then, martyl pulled up and invited them for a ride.
they got on and started to talk about their first fist fight.
"our first fist fight.. remember? we were fighting on who would marry winry?" al said.
"we did? really? hahaha i remember our first fist fight you curled up your little hand and punched me in the face!" ed said giggling at the memory.

__________END OF SECTER 2._________________________

I have secter 3 but im not done with it yet. i hope you enjoyed my story!

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