MY TRU LUV
EDWARD IS THE ONE FOR ME.
SATISFYING MY EVERY NEED,
NO NEED TO PICK HE'S MY CHOICE,
MY BODY TREMBLES TOWARDS HIS VOICE.
NO WORDS TO EXPRESS THE WAY I FEEL
FOR SOMEONE AS REAL AS ED.

I TOLD HIM SO MANY TIMES,
WHY CANT HE OPEN HIS EYES,
TO REALIZE
THE WAY I FEEL FOR HIM?
IS IT LOW SELF ESTEEM, I DON'T SEE HOW THAT CAN BE.
MAYBE WHEN HE LOOK AT HIMSELF
HE DOESNT' SEE GREATNESS,
BUT ME... I CAN SEE.

HE'S JUST TOO GOOD TO BE TRU,
NICE AND KIND
BUT HE'S TOO BLIND
TO UNDERSTAND THAT I DONT' WANT NO BODY ELSE.
I TRIED SO MANY TIMES TO MAKE HIM SEE THAT HE'S THE ONLY ONE!
BUT HE WONT' LISTEN,
AND ALL I CAN GIVE HIM IS MY WORD
*MuSiCaL AlcHmIsT*

You wanted Gold, Glory, and woman galore
The Second homunculus that Dante was to implore
An undying pride, trust and a diamond like shield
Along with your comrades, you fell upon the battle field

Hating the other 6 you wanted to be free
You were betrayed by that bastard Alchemist, kimbley
People called you the idiot monster name Greed
But was I the only one who cried to see you bleed?

You were told since Birth, that you have no soul
You were even created to play the minor role
So many wanted you to be put to the death
But to me and many others, you'll always be the best.

Broken and Bleeding you fell before Ed
"Beat them, you can do it." Was the last thing you said.
Created by broken pieces of flesh, blood and bone
Breaking from your prison you found out that you weren't alone.

You wanted the girls, the car and to be rich
Too bad you were weakened by Dante, that no good... B!%^
Greed, Greed the Free homunculi
Just once, Just once, you wanted to fly

Open your hands to grab what's in your reach
Giving Confidence to Al and Ed, was the last thing to teach
Everything, Everyone is something to yearn
But death and Rebirth is an important lesson to learn

You yearned for a home with no locks, walls and seals
The Only homunculus who liked how that woman feels
One by one you lost a comrade
A question remains... were you truly that bad?

and there you have it, this is my rhyme
By the time he hears it, there won't be much time
My one true love was the one named Greed
Even though, You weren't the one who played role Lead

Spread your hands and reach forward, afar
Always, forever you'll be my brightest Star
Dead, alone and gone like the rest
My home and yours is by the name of Devil's Nest

-A poem dedicated to Greed
-Written by Krazydog! XD

*applauds* kick *ss really that is phenominal

^^ thanks...? Who's poem are you referring to? Lol i posted this kimbley one in the Kimbley thread. xD So if you guys like Kimbley, hate or love doesn't matter. This poem is pretty short compared to the Greed one I wrote. :lol: Enjoy. Even though I *cough* HATE KIMBLEY *Cough*

There once was an Alchemist who loved Bloodshed
The Crimson Alchemist, the bloody, the Red.
Immoral, Cruel and bad to the core
You were still one of the best, despite all the gore

Destroyed the lives of the people in Ishbal
Their dark skin, red eyes, you wanted them to fall
Stay away from him, he'll bring you your doom
Blink once, too bad, this man will make you go boom

Arrested, Convicted and placed in time out
The man was still psycho, this I don't doubt
Evil, Cruel and Crazy in the head
You can't be trusted, even when your dead

Killed so many, that was your deed
I'll never forgive you, you betrayed him, the one named Greed
How can one man bring such a disaster?
Just shut up, we want to live, so start running faster.

Crimson Alchemist, he was hired by the State
Those who met him, was destined for a messy fate
Highly hostile, unsafe and extremely deadly
This wanted man's name is Zolf J. Kimbley

Move, Move get out of here now.
You better get going, letting you live is one thing he won't allow.
With the Circle in hand and his skills almost divine.
All the elements in you will be tuned oh-so fine.

Of all the horrible images and despicably cruel scenes
Knowing him, you'll be blown to smithereens
Run, Run this madman in on his way,
In just a few moments you'll be nothing but burns, maggots and nice flesh decay.

Now ladies and gentlemen there's a lesson to learn
Stay away from this man or else you will burn.
He's mad, explosive and downright crazy
Just stay away from him and you won't be fried like last night's KFC

-Written by Krazydog
-Title: Boom with Kimbley xD

If you have a character you want me to make a poem for, feel free to ask. ^^ I'll try my best!

Nice job, Krazydog and japanese princess. Man thoses were really, really good! Especially the one dedecated to Greed. I have a poem to post, though it does not rhyme. This is a taste of my poetry and my creative writing. I hope you like it!

Forever Goodbye

I remember it,
so clearly as if
it were right before me.
I remember it,
a painful stab
right in my heart.

Every time
I think of it
the wound opens
once again.
as if it were just cut.

There I stood waiting,
bathed in the silvery
light of the moon.
There I stood waiting,
this would be last time
I would see Fullmetal.

I gazed upon his beauty
my eyes burned his face
into their memory.
My eyes nearly forgot
how delightful he was to look on.

The wind blew,
and his golden hair fluttered and
glistened in the light of the moon.
The wind blew,
And I shivered,
Though it was not cold.

Oh Elric, why didn’t I tell?
I guess you never knew
what your voice, your presence, those eyes…
Oh those liquid amber eyes!
How all of you made my heart leap.

Oh, how I wanted to say it!
But I never did, at least
I never did when it mattered.
Oh how I wanted to say it!
But, I never did, even when
your eyes inquired me about my feelings.

Now here I stand, gazing upon you.
Simply wondering what could have been,
only comprehending that I will never know.
But some how I think you know,
I think you’ve felt my heart and know that I…

Oh Edward, I love you!
But, alas, I shall never get to tell you
with my own voice how much I do.
Oh Edward, I love you!
But now I must take my leave.
Goodbye, my love.

Forever goodbye...
Until our souls touch again.

*~By,
The Jewel Alchemist (A.K.A Aurora Starcrystal)~*

I was referring to both, now all three gret job you guys.

Thanks very much ^^ Though I think my Greed poem was better than the Kimbley one ahh well... I put little effort to people I dislike i suppose T T
Jewel Alchemist, you write such touching poetry... *sniff* it really is nice *sniff*

I have Never been able to write peotry, and probably never will. Some people just have that gift, like you three. How do you have the time to make such good peoms. :D

I know that may be a retorical question but...When I have inspiration, the words just flow into me and through my hands. I see the images in my head, and my heart feels alive. Anyone can be a poet, they just have to write what they feel. That is what poetry is after all.

thanks a lot for your compliments. i also enjoyed all of your poems as well. but everything inspires me. i can be sitting anywhere and all of a sudden i have a poem. just like the jewel alchemist said. the words and images come to u naturally. and soon after you will start to get use to it. i just write how i feel, and i feel a great amount of love for edward.

I write a good poem every three months. It doesn't come to me fast enough. <_< But, when I do make poems, they are always dark and depressing; Mostly because I listen to sad music. Music is an inspiration to me.

At first glace, you freaked me out,
Sent my sibling running to the hills.
You devious grin, it makes me pout,
You give me the worst of chills.

I may have thought that Uncle Wolf was fit for me at first,
I love the baddies, bad or worse,
But I knew inside that you were the one
That I thought was the worst.

A thought here, a dream there,
You tricked through my head.
I'd look at you and suddenly,
I'd be trembling in my bed.

Of course at first you seemed so twisted,
mad as a hare you are
But then my heart, oh it insisted
That I hadn't looked too far.

But, Envy, you see,
Are you as crazy as me?
Are you willing to try the task-
Would you jump from a building,
and learn how to fall,
and not even manage a gasp?

But back to the chase, I can't hold it out,
I'll burst from all of the hiding.
It may just be a little spout,
or it could be that I was just lying.

Oh Envy, I love you!
I know that it's true,
and if anybody gripes
I'll shout out- "SCREW YOU!"

(By the way, if you get anywhere near Alou, she'll make sure you get shot in the
H-E-D and then you'll be D-E-D 'Until you regenerate, though!')~ INSIDE JOKE!

Ha ha ha, neat poem!!!!!!!

Lol, yeah! I love the ending...so I guess I get a "Screw you." from Arrogence :P . Which I am fine with.

so do anyone has anymore neat poems they have to share regarding their favorite FMA character. they can be funny, sad, depressing, etc. jus as long as your talking about that character.

:D Just wait until my finals are over and I'll come up with another one!!!

yea, i especially cant wait to read your poems, i still havent forgotten about the last one.

Title: All for one and one for all

Chimera - Loa, Martyl and Dorochette

Tortured, Locked and sent to a lab
We were treated like animals, beasts, mere humans in rehab
So much pain, terror and even a loud scream
We stuck together, forever, always a team

It was Scary, Dark and totally Black
We hated it, we hated it but there was no turning back
Betrayed, Destroyed and left for as dead
We were set up and next thing we knew, animal food was fed

Following orders, swiftly, with skill and with haste
Next thing we knew, we were done, the State called us a disgrace
Again and Again, we were gone one by one
We soon lost hope, it was over, we were soon to be done

(Martyl)

Mixed with the black, hatred blood of a Snake
I wanted to kill them, break them, any good chance I’ll take
I won’t be taken, I’ll kill them, I’ll fight
But soon he came for us, he freed us that Night

(Loa)

He gave us a home, a place by his side
“Heck I’ll take it; sure I’ll go for that ride.”
He came for us, saved us, soon we were freed
The name of this man, the Homunculus name Greed

(Dorochette)

We were nothing in this world, no place to belong
But this man taught us, there’s no deed that was wrong
Mixed with the blood of one of Man’s best friend
Greed made a promise; He’ll hang with us till the very end

All:
Together we went, traveled afar
Devil’s Nest was our place, a mere tavern, a bar
Sealed away, he wanted mere freedom
His dream was to get cash, women and maybe a kingdom

Together us 3, stayed by his side
He was greedy, but honest, we watched him with Pride
Never once will we leave him, he’s our great king up high
Respect his name, Greed, the Rebel Homunculi

Together we traveled, to find the place we’ll call home
Whether it was in hell, heaven or a great City like Rome
We all shall live to follow our dream
We’ll always be together, we’re the tightest, a team

(Dorochette)
Then one night we were forced to flee
Our friends were dead, one by one without mercy
Those bastards, those bastards, they were dressed in suits of blue
I’m part Dog, I hate them, and this part is true

(Dorochette)
I had a job to be done, a goal, to stay by my Master
We couldn’t look back, only move forward, keep going, run faster
Greed was my friend, my ally, my brother
If I throw my life away, don’t worry, don’t bother

(Loa)

Then they came for us, two strangers in black
They told us there was no hope, no chance, no point to attack
Along with the dog, It was our time to fight
My strength is my gift, I’ll show them my might.

(Martyl)

With terror I watched, together they died…
I couldn’t do anything, all I could do was hide
Then Greed, you told me, you left us alone
You had something to do, a deed, a sin to atone.

(Martyl)

Why did you leave? You never came back.
You must have fallen, fallen from those freaks in black
Now I’m alone No friends by my side
I was trapped, alone, forced to flee, forced to hide.

Together we’re family, together we died
It was alright, we were loyal, forever by your side
Master Greed, you were the one, we were finally freed
It made us happy, for you, together we bleed

He had an ambition, he had a dream to uphold
He may be naughty, greedy and sometimes rash and bold
He was our master, our leader, our chief
He made us happy, he was our family, tho the time was brief

It mattered not, together it was fun
Our lives ended, over and done
We went together, together we fall
Now we know the true meaning, All for one and one for all.

-By Krazydog~ I found the chimera's loyalty super inspiring! This goes well with the Greed poem ^^. LONG LIVE DOROCHETTE, MARTYL AND LOA!

Brilliant, simply brilliant my friend! I too would have been inspired by thier loyalty, however, I forgot to see last night's episdoe!! I loved the ending wonderful! "All for one, and one for all!" that was a brilliant way to end it *claps! The rhyming and and anaphora was used wonderfullly! I could have not done a better job!

yes, good job krazydog. i like the way you seperated each stanza and then had each person talk seperately then at the end everone joined in!

Heheh ^^ thanks. :lol: *Hugs Devil's Nest Crew* I LOVE THEM SO MUCH!

Except Kimbley and Tucker... *Kicks their dead bodies* DIE!

LOL, ha ha hah ah ha ha ha ha ha haha, you're silly drazydog. :lol: :lol:

silly? Maybe I am....
muehehehe...

LOL. I think you are. do u have any other poems u can share

I have one for Edward:3 Dun ask. XD

The Full Metal Alchemist

Recognized by the state, a master of great Alchemy
You were only 12 back then, a real child prodigy
Along with your brother, you traveled around
New people, Experience and new memories were found.

Hotheaded and sensitive about lack of height
Anyone who messed with you, you’ll give them a fight.
To atone for your sins, and believe in your dream
Despite your tiny size, you’re much more than you seem.

Stand up on your legs, legs of steel automail
Keep going, move forward, many enemies follow your trail.
Pride of the State, you are an elite.
Be Careful, watch out there’s new trouble you’ll meet.

Call him tiny, call him a bean
You’ll soon regret it; this kid’ll cause one hell of a scene.
With hair and eyes the color of gold
He’s tiny, he’s short, he’s a sight to behold.

A Dream in hand, a past to remember
This kid has seen the gate, the cost, he was slowly dismembered.
Now, moving forward with a leg and arm of hard steel,
He may be metal, but his heart and soul are definitely real.

Look out runt, there’s trouble ahead
Look forward, keep going that’s what your friends all said.
You may be a master, a real genius, the best
But remember, it’s dangerous you’re still forgetting the rest.

You may have enemies, opponents and fiends,
Remember boy, we’re here behind you, don’t forget what that means.
You’re name is Edward, the genius, the kid
You’ve done the unforgivable, the one sin god forbid

But don’t worry child, you’re life is precious like silk
Too bad you don’t realize it, so start drinking your milk!
The road may be difficult but you must look ahead
The path is open to you, to the great stone, the cursed, the red.

You live in misery, you live in a world of pain…
Many times you look out, the world is dark like the rain.
You represent all that’s good, precious and light
You may be young, but you know well how to fight!

In a world of no bounds, you travel about
You’ll meet hardships on this road, go forward and shout!
You’re young, you’re bold, everyone knows your name
This may bring trouble, the worship, the fame.

But don’t worry kid, look up, have no fear…
Hold your friends, your heart, everything that's so dear.
When you come to town, everyone will finally cheer,
Look. Look. Edward Elric is here!

-Written by Psychodog.