MY TRU LUV
EDWARD IS THE ONE FOR ME.
SATISFYING MY EVERY NEED,
NO NEED TO PICK HE'S MY CHOICE,
MY BODY TREMBLES TOWARDS HIS VOICE.
NO WORDS TO EXPRESS THE WAY I FEEL
FOR SOMEONE AS REAL AS ED.

I TOLD HIM SO MANY TIMES,
WHY CANT HE OPEN HIS EYES,
TO REALIZE
THE WAY I FEEL FOR HIM?
IS IT LOW SELF ESTEEM, I DON'T SEE HOW THAT CAN BE.
MAYBE WHEN HE LOOK AT HIMSELF
HE DOESNT' SEE GREATNESS,
BUT ME... I CAN SEE.

HE'S JUST TOO GOOD TO BE TRU,
NICE AND KIND
BUT HE'S TOO BLIND
TO UNDERSTAND THAT I DONT' WANT NO BODY ELSE.
I TRIED SO MANY TIMES TO MAKE HIM SEE THAT HE'S THE ONLY ONE!
BUT HE WONT' LISTEN,
AND ALL I CAN GIVE HIM IS MY WORD :(
*MuSiCaL AlcHmIsT*

Nicely done! I liked it! But if you wanna post this I think it should go under the Lit section. But that's for the Mod to decide. Yeah Edward can be blind like in the episdoe, "The House of the Waiting Family". He was to blind to see that his family was right under his nose.

ya..

im quite that way too.



nice poem ><

Is this a competition? If it is, or even if it is not, I have a poem for you. This is a taste of my poetry and my creative writing. I hope you like it!

Forever Goodbye

I remember it,
so clearly as if
it were right before me.
I remember it,
a painful stab
right in my heart.

Every time
I think of it
the wound opens
once again.
as if it were just cut.

There I stood waiting,
bathed in the silvery
light of the moon.
There I stood waiting,
this would be last the time
I would see Fullmetal.

I gazed upon his beauty
my eyes burned his face
into thier memory.
My eyes nearly forgot
how delightful he was to look on.

The wind blew,
and his golden hair fluttered and
glistened in the light of the moon.
The wind blew,
And I shivered,
Though it was not cold.

Oh Elric, why didn’t I tell?
I guess you never knew
what your voice, your presence, those eyes…
Oh those liquid amber eyes!
How all of you made my heart leap.

Oh, how I wanted to say it!
But, I never did, atleast
I never did when it mattered.
Oh how I wanted to say it!
But, I never did, even when
Your eyes inquired me about my feelings.

Now here I stand, gazing upon you.
Simply wondering what could have been,
only comprehending that I will never know.
But some how I think you know,
I think you’ve felt my heart and know that I…

Oh Edward, I love you!
But, alas, I shall never get to tell you
with my own voice, how much I do.
Oh Edward, I love you!
But now I must take my leave.
Goodbye, my love.

Forever goodbye...
Until our souls touch again.

*~By,
The Jewel Alchemist (A.K.A Aurora Starcrystal)~*

Wow jewel alchemist that's actually where i got the idea to come up with the title and the theme of my poem. Your good :D :lol:


....oh yeah my god what a beautiful poem, i preactically saw the poem in my mind as i was reading it. it's just so beautiful, i'm bout to cry! :( :(

Oh thank you! You are so nice! I am probably going to come out with a Christmas Story one shot. I cannot wait to start! I cannnot wait to read your story as well!

thanxs, i'm going to get started on a christmas character myself, and a story as well. i keep seeing this image of a pretty female verson of santa claus, i'm going to get started on that so i can get it out of my head, LOl,

lol, I know how that is! Oh I cannot wait to read it! I bet it will be simply amazing, knowing your talents! Sadly...I have Finals next week...they are going to kill me...*tear*

yea me too, i have finals for lke almost every class, i feel your pain, let's cry together. wannnnnnnnn! :( :( :(

Ok, thats neat.

You just got to admire the brotherly love !!!!

i do, when i posted the one 'ok, that was neat' i was tired, X_x;

Heh, I saw this and had to come here. I looooove poetry. Here's a piece about my almost favorite character....Maes HUGHES!!!



Ode To Hughes

Dark case lowered into the ground,
Weeping soldiers standing all around.

Dressed in black from head to toe,
Time seems to tick by much too slow.

Dark haried man crouched close to the ground,
Tears stream down and down.

Daughter clutched to mother's legs,
"Don't bury Papa" The little girl begs.

With a slam God closes the door
[SIZE 14]Maes Hughes is no more.[/SIZE]

I really liked it. Nicely done! Very touching.