Daisuke Niwa
Please.......This is my BEST work...please respond to it or I'll get the idea i'm not as talented enough to post it up here. Please.

Its alright. You seem to be improving.
By the way, You shouldn't write Daisuke Niwa DNANGEL © Aly
because the anime character and anime itself does not belong to you. If you put that then it would be considered theft.
Rather it should be:

Daisuke Niwa DNAngel © _______(Enter Author here)____
And Artwork © Aly

oh oops ^_^;
Thanks, I've been trying very hard on improving my drawing skills ^_^

You have improved wonderfully, Aly! You getting better! :D :)

Thanks Dread ^_^