this is a story that I think is my best... please comment..I would really appreciate it...it took me a long time to write this...

Elisa sighed sadly as she slowly slinked back in through the front door from a long visit with the colonel, Roy Mustang. She slinked past Kim and Bob, slightly noticing them by sight in the corner of her eye. She sickly sighed and then sat down on the velvet rocking chair.
Kim looked extremely worriedly at Elisa. Elisa's face was deep red like she had been illy crying, and sweat was rolling down her pretty face, and around her left cheek was a barely noticeable bruise. "Elisa--" Kim abruptly started, Elisa quickly stood up and started off towards her room. "Elisa!" she followed her. "Kim I don't want to talk" Elisa lowly replied, as she quickened her pace. "Elisa, why don't you trust me with your problems?" Kim angrily snapped, putting her right hand on Elisa's shoulder. "I do trust you, Kim, I just don't want to talk!" Elisa sounded terribly irritable. she deliriously broke away from Kim and walked into her room. she closed the door. Kim put an ear to Elisa's door.

Elisa slowly lied down on her bed and wiped the sweat from her cute face, she rubbed her cheek where she had been struck hours before by the colonel, she closed her eyes...Within minutes her breathing had become heavy.
She thrashed around in her bed for about 3 hours with no screams heard, she abruptly woke minutes later. "Oh, man.." she wiped the sweat and tears from her face and just about screamed when she saw Kim sitting in the chair by her bed.
"Elisa.. will you tell me what is going on with you? what happened?" Kim asked, sounding quite irritable with Elisa.

"well...it started like this..." Elisa deliriously started, "I was at Central City Headquarters..Roy was giving me a lecture on my bad attitude... it seemed like hours, I slept through half of his scold...which was pretty funny, but he struck me..hard.." she stopped, pointed to her left cheek. Kim ran her hand down Elisa's slightly bruised cheek. "Your..alright, aren't you?" Kim asked. Elisa continued. "how long was I gone? it seemed like forever." "You were gone for 3 hours" Kim quickly replied, "I tried going looking for you but Bob told me to stay here"

Elisa's explanation of her absence of content-ness continued, Kim listened like a good non-biological mother would.
"Elisa, you know way too much about this stuff, I don't even know what a Humonculi is.." Kim sounded frightened, "be careful"
Elisa looked worriedly at Kim, "I will...but I'm pretending that I don't know anything..." she replied, with a cute little smile on her face. Kim sighed with relief, "You better be REALLY careful with that information."
Elisa's long blonde hair fell in front of her face, "I will Kim... please don't worry...."
Suddenly there was a soft knock at the door. "I'll be right back Elisa" Kim smiled, getting up and rushing to the door. she slowly unlocked the door and opened it. there stood a blonde boy with golden brown eyes. "Edward?" Kim was surprised, she thought she'd never see him again. he looked taller since she had last seen him, and more formal. his braid had turned into a long ponytail. he was only inches shorter than herself. "Edward....Elisa's in her room..." Kim sweetly mumbled, Ed smiled and walked past her. "Elisa?" Edward sweetly forte-said, "are you awake?"
Elisa glanced at the door, she gasped and a smile appeared on her face, she abruptly got up and ran to him. she hugged him tightly around his waist, "Edward I missed you so much!" Elisa cried tears of joy. she hadn't seen him in at least 2 years.
Edward hugged her back, "I missed you too, Elisa" Edward was now an 18 year old Rocket Scientist, and Elisa was a 15 year old girl named The Telepathy Alchemist.

Suddenly explosions boomed outside, the sky had turned dark. Elisa, Edward, Kim, and Bob all ran out the door. "SECOND LIEUTENANT! GET YOUR GUN! TELEPATHY ALCHEMIST! WE NEED YOUR HELP!" The colonel screeched, "FULL METAL! I knew you were alive!" Mustang hugged him tightly. "ACK!!! Colonel!!" Ed loudly screeched, "GET OFF"
Mustang backed off, "get your alchemy amped"
Ed looked at him weirdly, "Amped?" he sighed, nodding in agreement, he clapped his hands together and made a wonderful blue light, a part of the ground abruptly lifted up under Al, Ed, and Elisa, it lifted them to the main enemy's battleship "Elisa! COME WITH ME!" Ed urged, a woman Elisa has never seen before turned around from the wheel of the sky ship and glared at Elisa, "I've seen you before little girl... you won't get away from me, and neither will you, Edward Elric"
Elisa looked weirdly at the woman, "not if I get you first" she used her alchemy to lift up a chair, she lunged it at the woman.
"ACK! MY FACE!" she screamed, falling into the wheel and making the sky craft speed down towards central. "OH CRAP" Elisa screeched, using her alchemy to make it go up, "Edward....let's jump on 3...this thing will explode soon" Edward looked at her very confusedly. "1.....2.....3....JUMP!" they both jumped out of the skycraft, seconds later it exploded in the air. "o_o...meep" Elisa whimpered. Ed put his arms around her. "is it over?" The second lieutenant asked, he was still ducking behind a rock. Elisa laughed, "Yes...it is"

Bob stood up from a hard fall from the central building, "ouch...Kim....we need the... medical box" he pointed to his wounds and then pointed to the two kids, they were slightly injured. "You mean the first aid kit?" Kim asked, correcting her husband. Kim walked over to Elisa and wrapped her wrists and her head, "you gotta be more careful, Elisa" she turned to Edward, "and you, you've put yourself in more danger than I've ever seen!!!" she slapped him, "You have to be VERY careful! Alchemy is not the answer to everything! Science can't solve everything!"
"whatever you say, old lady" Edward joked. "and you have to learn more manners!!" Kim scolded, slapping him again.
Ed stayed quiet for a few hours, a new record. Kim wrapped the rest of Elisa's wounds and went to Bob's aid. Elisa slowly stood up and supported herself on Edward, "....we did it" she smiled, Edward stood up and picked her up into his arms, the height difference was uncanning. she was around 4'2" and he was around 6 feet tall... they looked to sweet together, even though he looked like a normal college student and she looked like a little girl.
an hour later, Ed had to go back through the gate and destroy it. she didn't want him to leave...she buried her face into Mustang and started to cry. Edward looked back, and as a tear ran down his face he crossed. Elisa watched with amazement as Al followed through without Edward's knowledge.

years passed since then, Elisa had kept control of her anger every time someone commented on her height, she then suddenly lost it when she was 17, she attacked the colonel and almost got de-comissioned. the second time around, she pantsed him, stole the second lieutenant's cigarettes, stole the first lieutenant's gun, stole fuery's glasses, stole the Fuhrer's swords, and gave them to the wrong people. by the time she was 19 years old, she couldn't do that anymore or she would get decomissioned, and she needed the Military's protection with her information, the paperwork was endless and she forgot nights of sleep, days without food or water, she knew it was her job now to keep the military informed. since The Full metal Alchemist was no where to be seen, but she knew exactly where he was. Munich, Germany, in Bayern. staying with Noah, and Alfons Heidriech. but she had heard about Alfons's death recently, she hadn't met him but she was willing to meet Noah and Soldier Hughes. Ed had told her all about them.
She went to the underground city where The humonculi died, she stepped in the middle of the transmutation circle and drew some of her blood, she saw a white and yellow flash, she then found herself falling...falling....falling... into a strange world she has never seen before, below she saw Edward walking. "EDWAAAAAARDD!!!" she screamed, as she fell, Edward caught her, the force of him catching her knocked her out. Edward looked at Elisa, "....Elisa.....?" Edward ran her to where he was staying, he ran past Noah and set Elisa down on his own bed. "who is she?" Noah asked, walking in. "This is Elisa.. I knew her since I was 15.. and she was 12.....she's the Telepathy Alchemist"

Suddenly there was a knock at the door. it was Soldier Hughes. his heavy boots boomed towards the room they were in. Hughes looked at Elisa and then at Edward, "Where did that girl come from?" he snapped, Elisa slowly opened her eyes, "F...Father?" she drowsily looked at Hughes. "I repeat! who is this girl?!" Elisa stood up and limped towards Hughes, "daddy?" she absent-mindedly looked up at him. Hughes winced and kneeled down before Elisa, "little girl, I think you have me confused with someone else. my name is Soldier Maes Hughes" he patted Elisa's head, "I have no children" Elisa tilted her head to one side, "You're Hughes? Edward told me about you...I've always wanted to meet you" Hughes smiled. "you are?"

"My name is Elisa. I'm 19." Elisa replied. Hughes looked at her wide-eyed, "you look to be only 9 years old!"
"I'm sorry, but when I was 7 I had chemotherapy for cancer..and it stunted my growth" Elisa replied, looking up at Hughes, "I hope that's okay" "yes, it is...it's not like it's illegal here in Germany" Hughes chuckled, he saluted and walked out, Elisa saluted back to him. "I will see you later" Hughes smiled, looking back at Elisa. Noah was hiding behind Edward. Elisa winced as Hughes closed the door, "....." no comment was heard from her.
"I must go uptown to get supplies to make you guys a special....dish that I learned a while ago" Elisa giggled, walking out the door with a purple coat on and a basket. she skipped down the sidewalk, Edward watching her confusedly.

sunset came fast. Elisa started to run, she had just been shopping at the Örtlich Markt, she skipped past 3 men talking to each other in German. "Hallo, jenes Mädchen, hübsch?" one of the men said, "Ja she ist sehr hübsch, müssen Eltern sehr stolz sein." one of the other men replied. the third man looked grumpy and mean, "Ein gutes Mädchen, wie dass in dieser Welt nicht sein soll, ist es gefährlich." he inched his way towards Elisa.
"Nicht, Dir halten Recht dort! Ich bin nicht Einige Ein wie dir könnte abholen und Nehmen Sie! Ich bin Neunzehn, Nur weil ich bin Kurz, bedeutet nicht, dass Sie mich entführen können! Trottel....." Elisa snapped.
The man backed away, "Dass madchen's Hat g-u-t-s erhalten, um an mir ZU SHNAPPEN! kleines Mädchen, ich bin Weg älter als Sie und Sie sollen mir zuhören, bevor Sie verletzt sind!"
Elisa ran faster from him, the man chased after her, "EDWARD!!!" she screeched, tears running down her face, she was frightened.

In Edward's place, he heard his name being hollered, "that sounds like Elisa!" Edward jerked up and ran out the door with his coat, he spotted a short girl with the purple coat's hood up over her head, "Elisa!" Edward exclaimed, "What's wrong?!" he then noticed a man running after her, "Help me!" she screeched, she tripped and fell into a puddle. it then started to rain. Edward ran towards her before the man could have time to snatch her, Edward stepped in front of the man and clotheslined him on his auto mail arm, he knocked the attacker out. he picked up Elisa and ran towards the place they were staying.

Edward helped Elisa take her coat off, "ok...go get cleaned up and I'll call the police" he had dragged the unconscious man back with them and tied him to a chair so he couldn't do any harm to poor Elisa.
around 10 minutes after the incident, Elisa was blow drying her hair when the police arrived, she got out the first aid kit and wrapped her knee, she had scraped it when she fell. "yow" she whispered to herself, she was afraid to go out of her room because of her limp, and she was afraid of the police. "Elisa! Please come out!" Edward called.
Elisa cautiously creaked open the door and slowly walked out, "y..yes?" she stuttered, looking at the cops. "I need you to speak to them for me" Edward replied.
"Vielen Dank wissen deshalb viel Elisa!" A soldier exclaimed, hugging Elisa. "Sie bin willkommen" Elisa replied.
The soldiers left, their heavy boots stomping on the wooden floor as they carried the unconscious beast out. Elisa was shaking in fear. Edward looked over at her, "Are you ok, Elisa?" Elisa fell backwards, her eyes closing slowly, she landed hard on the wooden floor. Ed gasped, "Noah! Call an ambulance!" Noah hurried towards a phone and quickly dialed 911. the ambulances arrived minutes later, they lifted Elisa onto a stretcher, Edward and Noah rushed into the back of the ambulances with Elisa.

When they arrived at the hospital, the doctors rushed Elisa to the Emergency room, they told Noah and Edward to stay in the waiting room. Minutes later they wheeled Elisa out of the emergency room towards Noah and Edward. "don't worry. it was just a extreme fright that put her in this position" The doctor sighed, "she'll be alright" he picked up Elisa and handed her to Ed. Ed hugged her and then they were on their way back home. it was still raining outside, by the time they arrived back home they were all soaking wet. when Ed tried putting Elisa down, she clung to him. "Elisa....let go.." Edward sleepily ordered. "but...but I'm scared" Elisa replied, a tear ran down her face. Edward's heart was hurting as he pried Elisa off of him, "Get some sleep" he ordered again, "Please"

Elisa cried through the night in fear, Edward's heart being torn out with every wail coming from Elisa's room. he heard Noah walking towards Elisa's room, "Elisa dear, you won't get any sleep if you cry, if you tell me what you are afraid of I will help you" Noah sweetly talked to Elisa. "i....it's... being alone" Elisa whimpered. Noah sweetly smiled, "you aren't alone, Edward's here, I'm here.." she hugged Elisa. Elisa fell asleep in Noah's arms knowing she was safe.

The next morning she awoke by the sounds of Al, Ed, and Noah's voices. she heard her door open, she saw Al walk in. "Hey...you alright?" Al asked. "uh-huh" Elisa replied, "now shoo" she giggled, Al blushed and closed the door.
Elisa got dressed and walked out of her room, her cute Mary-Jane shoes tapping against the wood. Al giggled, "you're so cute..." Ed started to laugh, "he's right Elisa...you are" Elisa scowled, she walked past Edward and Alphonse and walked out the door. Noah giggled, "she is quite the sweetheart" "I better go with her to make sure she doesn't get hurt" Ed replied, walking out the door after Elisa. he spotted Soldier Hughes speaking with Elisa, Hughes suddenly pulled out a gun and aimed it at her.

"How do you know about Humonculus?" Hughes snapped, about ready to pull the trigger. "Don't shoot! I know about them after I found out my father was killed by one! please don't kill me!"Elisa exclaimed. Hughes scowled. Gracia growled as she walked towards Hughes. "Huuughes!" she growled, "Don't you dare hurt that poor girl!" "Fine" he put away his gun. Ed was wide-eyed.

Elisa turned around, "Edward! get Noah and Alphonse!" she hollered. "Why?" Ed asked. "Just do it! I know how we can get back home!" Elisa exclaimed, Edward looked doubtful but she ran to get them anyway.
when he came back with them, Elisa motioned them to follow her, she took them to a large dorm with a transmutation circle on the ceiling and on the floor, she drew some of her blood onto the circle and everyone stood in the middle as ordered, as the transmutation started up, she crawled towards Edward. there was a blinding white and yellow and blue flash, they then found themselves falling...falling onto a different looking world, Ed spotted Central HQ....they kept falling. Ed landed on the Headquarters building and caught Al and Elisa from falling, Noah fell behind him. they all slid down the Headquarters banister and landed softly on their feet in front of the Headquarters' front doors.

"Well...you did it, Elisa" Ed looked surprised, "w...were home" they all headed to the train station. "Elisa?" Noah asked, "where can I stay?"
"Oh, you can stay with winry...she's my cousin...she'll allow you in" Elisa smiled. "oh alright, thank you very much Elisa" Noah replied. They all boarded the train to Risembool.

"EDWARD! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE FOR SO LONG WITHOUT SAYING GOODBYE?!" Winry screeched at the top of her lungs, chucking her wrench towards him, he ducked and it smacked Elisa on the head. Winry's face went from annoyed to scared, she ran to Elisa, "are you alright Elisa?!" she exclaimed, picking her up and setting her on her feet. "yes I'm ok Winry" Elisa replied, rubbing her head. "Elisa, Noah, Al, Ed...you all can stay here for as long as you want...I just don't want you to leave me again.." Winry held back tears, she took Elisa's hand and motioned the rest to follow her in. They all walked to the spare rooms that the Rockbell's home kept, awaiting their future to come after they left the Rockbells.
The End
be sure to check with me to see if there will be the second story written about Elisa, Noah, Edward, Alphonse, and winry.

Elisa Lynne, age 15
1908-1943..her growth was stunted because of ChemoTherapy when she was seven years old.

German Translation to English::
Hallo, jenes Mädchen, hübsch = Hey, isn't that girl pretty?
Ja she ist sehr hübsch, müssen Eltern sehr stolz sein = Yes she is very pretty, her parents must be very proud
Nicht, Dir halten Recht dort! Ich bin nicht Einige Ein wie dir könnte abholen und Nehmen Sie! Ich bin Neunzehn, Nur weil ich bin Kurz, bedeutet nicht, dass Sie mich entführen können! Trottel....." = No, you stop right there! I am not some one who you could just pick up and take! I am nineteen, just because I am short, does not mean you can kidnap me! Moron....
Dass madchen's Hat g-u-t-s erhalten, um an mir ZU SHNAPPEN! kleines Mädchen, ich bin Weg älter als Sie und Sie sollen mir zuhören, bevor Sie verletzt sind! = That Girl's got guts to snap at me! little girl, I am way older than you and you should listen before you get hurt!
Vielen Dank wissen deshalb viel Elisa = Thank you so much Elisa!
Sie bin Willkommen = You are welcome