I did this pic the other day, and I REALLY like it...I hope someone out here does too. I worked hard, being ALL done by hand and no comp help. Owies....I guess that's why I have Carpel Tunnel now...oops. Well, tell me what you think. Critiques are welcome! I always want to improve! ^_^

yeah!! Edward Elric!!

very good, you have strong skills in art.

Thanks Chrono! :lol: I'm glad someone likes it! I love all things feather/wings! (not bat or insect wings) Idk why, I just do!

Hmmm.....I think his automail arm is too big for his body, and I think his bangs are longer than they should be. But, besides that, you did very good. I love the fact you detailed his automail arm so much.

Yeah, I tried to emphasize his arm by putting the most detail into it, and making it slightly bigger, as if it were closer to the camera/point of perspective. Hmmm. I think right about the bangs though. They DO seem a bit long...

*oggles*

Ooh, very good! I love the detail you put into his automail, and I adore the coloring. I can't color things near as well as that. Oh, and the feathers are very-well drawn, too.

Great job, Quig! ;)

Its good. But where the arm and the body meets is off. you cant see the arm pit which is joint where you can see the underside of the arm. Also, the human anatomy needs some tweaking. But aside from that its good.

awsome thats really good