the brothers elric, with an unknown past
who unending joy did not last,

the boys who challenged the sun ahead
and showed the fake who bought back the dead

the boys who befreind the maniac within,
who sacrifised his family with his evil sin,

another killer, who never did learn,
is his fate sealed or will he return?

-more later-

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does anyone like it?

Interesting... simplistic rhyme scheme, but it works in this case. Keep it up!

Put more! I like it! I was going to write some poetry, but mine probably wouldn't ryhme.....