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Title: Al's quest


Summoner Colette - June 1, 2006 04:17 AM (GMT)
This is my first piece in a LONG time, so give me some slack. :P

Anyways, this isn't a one-shot story ( A little too long) or a fanfic (far too short).


Characters: Al (of course), Ed, Roy, Hughes, Greed, a little Riza, and a few OC girls who are of no significance.
Pairings: Saying anything would spoil the ending :P A tiny EdxWinry hint at the end, and a little RoyxRiza at the middle. HughesxGracia too. And of course, Ed vs. Greed. =P
Setting: All over Central and Dublith. Mainly it's after the Greed arc. But Greed's magically alive. Don't ask questions! >> This little story has attributes from the anime and manga.



Anyways, here it is:

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_prev...67744&chapter=1

On one note, Al is not supposed to be afraid of Greed, so don't get that idea. He just doesn't want to ask a homunculus for help. That's failing of all of us. :lol:

Well, I hope it wasn't TOO bad. Kinda of a crappy ending, but at least it was a happy one! xD My main frustration is too little of each character other than Al. It needs more Greed and Hughes. Also, I hope all the characters were in character!

Yuzu-chan - June 2, 2006 01:51 AM (GMT)
It won't let me go. :?

Summoner Colette - June 3, 2006 01:25 AM (GMT)

Yuzu-chan - June 4, 2006 02:12 AM (GMT)
xP yes it works, I'll review later =D I have a ff.net account

Dark General - June 4, 2006 09:02 PM (GMT)
Heh that was good. Thought the ed thing didn't need to be in there. Maybe a short joke by one of the girls would have been nice like "You need to be this tall to ride" while ed was looking at the girls.

Quig Alchemist - June 5, 2006 03:11 PM (GMT)
Cute story I thought it was funny! and then 2 minutes later and enormous fight breaks out between Al, Greed, and Ed! LOL!




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