( I know it sucks and barely makes any sence..but yeah)

Falling apart at the seams
nothing is ever what it seems

When you look into the mirror
is it really you you see?
or somthing created by some sweet simplicity?

Hiding behind a mask
lies the scarred face

Wounded by the worlds cruel ways
and broken by the violent storm.

isolated in a sea of ice
surrounded by cold hard walls
protecting what lies beneath
the last bit of warm life

summer comes and summer goes
the ice remains forever more
to protect the last bit of warm life
that your body holds.

cut out the heart and let the blood pour
the emotions ran out long before.

let the soul escape and the body rot, your last chance to be
free once more.

I like it ^.^

i think it's pretty good. ^^

That's was good, i take it you wrote it yourself.A lot of meta4's.

wow roy ^_^

not eveyrone is good at poems so its pretty cool to have such a skill to write them

Wow! The poem rocks. I write poems also, but I don't ever think i'll post them.

That was a nice poem. It wasn't that bad.




Ukara, you really should post your poems, they aren't bad.