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Title: the ultimate party!


the true alchemist - April 8, 2006 12:42 AM (GMT)
I thought of this from this picture
this is my story regaurdless of the picture
user posted image
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Chapter 1: Opening
Ed and Al knock on the front door, to be answerd by Riza, "Hello boys" she says with a smile. She takes them to the back yard were everyone is having the party.
In the yard, many of things were happening. Winry was complamenting Archer's automail. Ruessel was hitting on Rose. Greed's chimera henchmen were all playing poker as Dorochet laid down a full house. Sig and Armstrong were having a muscle contest. Hoenhiem was flirting with Ross as Bloch sat in the corner and cried. Kimbley was doing fireworks for Flecher, Nina, and Elysia. Lust was talking to Armstrong's Sister while Havoc, Farman, Breda, and Fuery were all staring at both of them. Dante was talking to grandma Pinako. Gluttony was eating all of the snacks. Hughes was talking to Sloth. Cornelo was talking to Barry the Chopper. Greed was hitting on Lyra. Sheszka was talking to Mason. "hell of a party you got here" said ed.


So do you like it?

the true alchemist - July 11, 2006 10:37 AM (GMT)
Part 2: Out of Snacks and out of Time!


Gluttony finnaly stoped with the noisly eating at stoped frozen, His noise stoped and everyone turned to look at him, his face rose from the bowl of chips, his pupals were gone, his mouth was wide open and He was snarling. Ed turned to Dante, "WHAT DID YOU DO!?!", Dante looked back with fear, "I DIDNT DO ****! THATS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN HE RUNS OUT OF FOOD!" Gluttony jumped over the snack table and landed infront of Marcoh, Gluttony grabbed him by the face and swollowed him whole, marcoh could be heard from inside, as if he were falling down a well, "This isnt better the second tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiimmmmmmmmeee"
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"I hate you all!"

Then their seemed to be a distant splash...
"its ok Im still alive!"
"wait whats that"
"oh my god..."
"oh my god!"
"OH MY GOD!!!"
horrific screaming could be heard inside as everyone stood around listening in horror...

"We have to kill him!"
"How did you do it that last time!?!" yelled Ed looking at Lust
"I dont remeber!"
she stoped and thought for a second...
"OH!, QUICK! SCAR!... DIE!"

"ITS NO USE!" screamed ed,
"SACRIFISE!"
Ed grabbed the nearest person and threw them to Gluttony

"ELYSIA NO!" screamed Hughes

"My bad..." said Ed
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Want anymore?

Missy - July 11, 2006 12:44 PM (GMT)
I LOVED IT! please write more!!!!

**glues eyes to screen, waiting for more**...hahaha!!!

"sacrifice!"
"Elysia, no!"

that was just grand!!! its perfect!!! lolz! i cant stop laughing!!

Quig Alchemist - July 13, 2006 09:23 PM (GMT)
Same here! Too funny! LOL! WEEEEE! *also fixes eyes to screen*

the true alchemist - December 30, 2006 07:13 PM (GMT)
*cracks fingers* alright lets keep it going

As the Party started to slow down people started to lose interest and it was quicky becoming boring... "This party is starting to suck" said Ed, "We need to find something interesting and quick!", Hentai Mud wrestling!!!" screamed Roy loud enough that everyone else could hear him... everyone else all slowly stepped back away from him... "What a Great Idea but hears a better one!" Dante(Old Dante) jumped up on a table, "Check Me out!" She screamed as she ripped Open her shirt flashing everyone at the party... "OH MY GOD, IT BURNS!!! IT BURNS US!!!" screamed ed as he fell on the ground clutching his eyes and screaming a torchered yell, Ed grabbed a liquid off one of the tables and threw it on his eyes hoping it would make the pain go away... "Ed" said Al, "Thats Milk" Ed suddely stop on the ground, Suddenly he spontainiusly combusted and caught a full body fire, "Ed hates milk but he will really catch fire if he touches it?" said Winry. "This has never happened before!, I never thought he would spontanisusly combust!" said Al. Roy looked left and right, "Yes yes spontainiusly combust" said Roy tucking his glove in his back pocket.

Hoenhiem was still staring at the Parading Dante, "Take this Funimation!" she screamed




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