Dear Deception,


I could say, “I love you”.

I could dance like a fool.

My voice could waver at

the sight of you. Cool beads

of rain could cloud my eye

because love moved me to.



But none on this list would

be true. I can say that

my skies are a soft blue,

the rain kisses, sun beams

hug me warm inside out,

and songs inside my throat



never go away. These

things are true, when it comes

to the thought of you. My

rock, tough, through Deadly’s mud

like problems. Realize

that this is your surprise.



*~By,

The Jewel Alchemist~*

Deception's kindness has inspired me! Now a little background about my poem. It was a school assignment where I would write a "letter" poem to someone. Sorry that my poem couldn't have been better. These were my guidelines so if it sounds akward this is why...

Nouns Verbs Adjectives


tamarack to kiss blue

throat to curve hot

belief to swing soft

rock to ruin tough

frog to bite important

dog to cut wavering

slag to surprise sharp

eye to bruise cool

cloud to hug red

mud to say leather



Use five nouns, five verbs (conjugate as you will), and five adjectives from the above lists and write a poem as follows:



Six beats to the line.
Six lines to the stanza.
Three stanzas.
At least two internal and one external slant rhyme per stanza (avoid full rhyme if possible).
Maximum of two end stops per stanza.
Clear English grammatical sentences. All sentences must make sense.
Title the poem as a letter addressed to someone or something (title is the salutation and doesn’t count as one of the lines).


Note: Your poem will have more than just these words in it (that is, you can use articles, conjunctions, adverbs, and other nouns, verbs, and adjectives).

Wow! I like it, made my day!! Thanx :lol:

Thank you! I'm glad I made someone's day!