Alright all, all that I need you to do is post "Yes" or "No" for EACH of the sub-territory ideas.
Here they are:
1. Vallix Pack
Vallin Meadow
This area is plentiful with game. Many wolves bring their young out to play in the open area while others much rather be hunting. During the day deer can be found grazing and sometimes if you look through the grass hard enough you may find a little rabbit. Not many trees are in this area but there are some that give a cool spot to rest.
2. Carmier Wood
The Pearl Glades
On the far northern side of the carmier woods, there is a place of such remarkable beauty, that all troubles seem to melt away. Evening the pearly white depths of winter, when each branch of every tree, and every hibernating flower is sprinkled with snow, the place still shines with the beauty of a thousand stars. The Pearl Glade received its name from both its remarkable beauty and its frothy creek that twists its wayward way through the middle of the glade. It is a circle area, and the entrance is laced with trees and flowers and such. The area is decorated heavily in the spring and summer with flowers, so many flowers that the air is potent and hypnotic. The water always bubbled except in the winter, when it freezes. The wolves say the place is so beautiful it is where the fairy king proposed to his wife, for it was the only place that matched her grace. All who travel here love it.
3. Akari Mountain Range
Ebony Coast
On the other side of the mountains lies a vast plain, more wide than long, and beyond the prairie resides the coast. The beaches are covered in velvet-soft black sands for as far as the eye can see, and dotted with small sparkling crystals of obsidian and black jet. The sand is warm beneath the paws, perhaps even hot, but not unbearably. Mangrove trees grow well in the salty ocean spray, covering much of the coast in sparse to dense mangrove forests. There is a small lagoon near the tip of the Akari range where the young of sea creatures can be found playing, filled with tall reeds and deep blue water. The water in the lagoon, however, is not as blue as that in the sea. Sparkling like a sapphire, it is rich with life. Kelp and sea weeds along the seafloor. Dolphins and manatees comeing up for breathin their travels or games. Shells a plenty to play with, and as many varieties of fish as their are colors in the world. The occassional bull shark is, of course, a major threat, but their visits are few and far between. It is a nice place to spend your afternoon lounging in the sun.
4. Carmier Wood
The Four Rivers of Paradise
It is here that a vast number of wolves often make their homes, if only for the beauty of the place. Far at the end of the meadow and on the brink of the forest, this is a land between two worlds. For some inexplicable reason, the river, here at a strong point, splits into four nearly parallel, calmer sections. They sections don't last a mile before they return to their original one, but because they split, all the land is extremely fertile and the plants grow here in more abundance than anywhere else in all of Enigma.
5. Tashic Lake
Sky's Lane
A shimmering, rapid-flowing river leading into the Tashic Lake, Sky's Lane is a treacherous spot for any creature, wolf or otherwise. The riverbed is stony. The water is cold. The channel is deep, and a single slip-of-the-paw could cost a life. But its beauty matches the lake itself, and thus, many still haunt the banks of this river.
6. The Town
Central
Just named "Central", this area really is indeed the centre of the Town. It had once been a neatly-kept park, but now, what with years of neglect and abandonement, this place is overrun with plants and pests. An array of shrubbery and weeds have dominated all concrete-free areas; moss and algae cling to damp patches; mice and cockroaches creep along the footpaths. It's a miracle how the clogged-up fountain still manages to spew jets of water, especially when storms ravage the lands. It may not been sceneric, but the chaotic appearance offers a chance of survival for fugitives and wanderers.
1. Yes
2. No > Seems too Fruufruu and fake
3. Yes (of course ^_^)
4. Yes
5. Yes
6. Yes
1. Yes
2. No
3. Yes
4. No
5. Yes
6. Yes
That guest was me my comp logged me out
1. No >> Misspellings.
2. Yes
3. No >> Manatees hardly possible, and several misspellings as well as an incongruence.
4. Yes
5. Ahem... Yes?
6. *Sheepish grin* Yes...
1) No
2) Yes
3) No
4) Yes
5) Yes
6) Yes
Vote!!! EVERYONE DO IT! NOW
1) No (uninteresting).
2) No (too heavenly; it makes it uninteresting).
3) No ( I have NO idea wth is going on here, seems to be describing like ten places not one. I DO like the idea of a black-sanded beach, though - they have those near where I live and they're interesting places).
4) No (meh. And it covers such a big area, I can't imagine where I'd put my char)
5) Yes (could be useful for RP, as a logical place for characters to run into each other: it would have good drinking water and everyone needs to drink).
6) Conditional yes; I will vote yes if it's reworded to acknowledge that no human-run fountain would run after a long period of time without them around (the place as a whole seems it might be kind of redundant but I'm fond of grungy places and I really like the idea of a fountain that still runs even though logically it shouldn't ... like a haunted fountain :D except there's no ghosts or anything, just this fountain that kind of randomly runs, and a creepy feeling... awesome).
Um ... okay, NO HARD FEELINGS guys? I hope I haven't hurt any feelings and I'm sorry if I did. I have absolutely NO IDEA who wrote the areas as I haven't been back in that thread since ... well, I think there was one entry posted when I last looked, but I can't remember what it was. So ... totally unbiased :D? hahahah
>.>;