Nice storyline! It was a pleasure reading this, as it makes me want to get off Carly's Angels and get back to my story. I noticed only one misspelling in the entire thing, so that's good and I like the way you phrase stuff. Good Job! :thumbsup:
oh yeah i forgot to comment this! but yes, i liked it! i wanna read more :)
| QUOTE (randomkoosh423 @ May 16 2009, 08:50 PM) |
| oh yeah i forgot to comment this! but yes, i liked it! i wanna read more :) |
I agree! I wanted to finish the story... *pouty eyes*